So, I was doing a critique tonight. And it was the person’s first book. And I was writing a bunch of the same things that I’ve written on a million other critiques since I started on Wattpad. And, it occurred to me that I keep giving people the same advice—advice that nobody gave me—and advice that beginner writer’s NEED. So I decided to put some of it down in a book, although I’m guessing most people won’t read it. Haha But the title pretty much says it all...

Kara Hawthorne refuses to fall in love until the brooding Cameron crashes into her life. He burns for her like no other. But the past doesn't forget and the biggest sacrifice of his life awaits. ***** Spitfire Kara Hawthorne is a hardworking twenty-one-year-old college student with a smart mouth who wants nothing more than to save her family's auto shop. But her life is thrown into a whirlwind as her intense attraction for the dangerous Cameron Saint Laurent becomes all too consuming. Cameron has revealed his painful memories to Kara, but she knows there is more he refuses to tell her. Cameron's past is clouded in mystery and is darker than even he knows. Will Cameron conquer his demons and claim Kara's heart, or will he let the darkness of his past destroy him and lose his chance at love forever? Book 2 in the In Love Series [[word count: 100,000-150,000 words]] Cover designed by Ren Tachibana

"I told you to stay away from her." Eric's voice was calm-too calm. "You should've listened to your parents, Cristian. Now you'll learn what happens to dogs who play with bones that don't belong to them." "She's not your property," Cristian snapped, venom lacing every word. "Now let her go." Eric's low chuckle slithered through the air just before his fist drove into Cristian's gut. The hit knocked the wind from him, forcing a grunt from deep in his chest. He doubled over, coughed once, then straightened with a growl that rumbled like thunder. Moonlight caught the flash of his canines as he bared his teeth. "That all you got?" ☆☆☆ Caught between duty and desire, Annalise faces a choice that could cost her everything. Bound by the traditions of her pack, Annalise has spent her life walking the line between obedience and freedom. But that fragile balance shatters when she's promised to the impulsive future alpha whose anger hides the same helplessness she feels as both of their lives are decided for them. As the weight of an unwanted engagement crushes her spirit, a shocking confession from her best friend ignites a storm of forbidden emotions. Love, loyalty, and legacy collide, forcing Annalise to confront the truth about her heart-and the dark secrets her pack has buried for years. In a world where betrayal runs as deep as blood, Annalise must decide whether to follow her heart... or the path her people demand.

[COMPLETED] Katrina Parker has never been normal, even by werewolf standards. An outcast, ostracized by her pack because of her unique Gift: the uncanny ability to see the future. After finding out that her mate has impregnated her sister, she rejects him and condemns herself to a life of solitude. All of that changes when a certain annoying, cocky, sexy Alpha comes to her territory to claim his spoil of war. The only problem? She hates him. Even worse? She's hiding a dark secret. A deadly one. ••Book 4 of the Gift Chronicles. Can be read as a standalone novel••

This story is a story about Ouran high school host club. Mainly about the vice president Kyoya and president tamaki. It's a BoyXBoy story and may contain some kissing and other romantic things. So please if you don't like yaoi. •-• look away. But it's okay I hope you like my story. I'll take feedback to.

Eileen Field is the ruthless CEO and owner of Field Enterprises. She is a fighter and she gets what she wants. So what happens when Nicholas Winston, owner and CEO of her rivaling business Winston Industries, starts showing interest in her. Will she accept it? She has always longed for a partner. Will he become her weakness? Or will past anger and hurt resurface? Cover art: @samlywatches Go check her out!!

In which I fall in love with my brother's best friend. ***** "Don't pretend like you don't feel anything." His voice is low, sending shivers down my spine. "What do you mean?" "You know damn well what I mean." "I don't know what you're talking about." I pretend to ignore him, flipping some pages in my book. "Come on. I have all these assignments waiting. Aren't you supposed to teach me tonight?" "It depends on what you want me to teach." He smirks, his voice sounding even more dangerous. ***** I thought that my brother was the most popular guy in school, but as soon as I step into my university life, I realize how wrong I was. Meet Vaughn Cooper, his best friend. The guy is the epitome of every girl's dream. Godlike handsome. The quarterback. He's got the looks, and he's got the brain. Come on, he's got the scholarship to one of the most prestigious universities in the country, while I have just barely passed the entrance examination after long years of struggle during high school. How could a guy who worked that hard and deserves nothing more but adoration be labeled as a bad boy? Yeah, the answer is simple. The moment we lock eyes, I realize something as I stare into those piercing, amber eyes. He's not every girl's dream. He's every girl's nightmare. In my case, MY nightmare. Calm down, heart. Our story hasn't even started. ***** THE SPENCERS SERIES BOOK #1 © 2020 Anya Jayvyn. All Rights Reserved. (Content warning: This book has descriptive sexual content, explicit language, and triggering themes)

"That scent. It was familiar. It's her. She's my mate. I finally found her. And she so beautiful and innocent. So I wrapped my arm around her neck to see what she'll do. And she blushed. And I thought to myself. Has she ever been flirted too? Has she ever been in a relationship with anyone? I want to know her more. She's mine and mine only. " A girl named Davina Claire, moving across the world. Having to start a new life with her single Father and oldest brother John and grandfather, making them stay in his mansion. A shy, innocent, beautiful girl. Scared of the world yet more of herself, she's broken for many of reasons. Till she mets him... Vladimir Waters, was your typical bad boy stereo type. Black hair, grey-blueish eyes, tall, muscular man. But with a deep secret that only a few know. He flattered at every girl but never really loved them because none of them were the one. Until he met Davina at school... Was it destined Or fate.. Read this book to find out on the love that consumed the two strangers.

[#1 in wearwolf 6/8/17] "Come on Jenna. Just one word." He taunt. He gripped my wrist in one hand and trailed his hand down my side to my hips. His hand went under my shirt and rested on my skin that sent sparks through my body. His finger did designs over my skin while he continue to nibble on the spot of my neck. "St-" His mouth come off my skin and I felt his glaze on my face. I open my eyes and barely see any hazel in his eyes. His eyes are fighting to get back to his regular eye color but the desire from him is fighting over his body. His lips are plump and my neck burns from the air hitting my raw neck. I don't know how he manage to bite my skin from the scabs from trying to heal my wounds but he manage to do so. "Say it." His voice is deep and husky. That it sent shivers through my spin, making me close my legs tight. He breathe in and his eyes went complete black. "Say it Jenna or I won't stop what's going to happen next." His voice is so deep that I didn't think it was Alcander. I looked straight in those deep coal eyes and said, "I Jenna Knox reject Alpha Alcander as my mate." ***** Jenna Knox. She always believed her mate would be some guy in some shining armor and would take her far away from her pack and raise a perfect family. But what she didn't know was that her mate was going be some one who kills for fun. Kills other packs,And laughs at their alpha who's on the ground begging for mercy. Let's just she how she handles Alpha Alcander. [COMPLETE] [FIRST BOOK, SECOND ALPHA VALDUS] * cover by @motelflowers* *READ AT YOUR OWN RISK* *NOT EDITED!* *Mature content* *A lot of cursing* *Highest rank so far; #1*

Gaslight is now published as a Wattpad Book! As a Wattpad reader, you can access both the Original Edition and Books Edition upon purchase. ***** Studious seventeen-year-old Maddie must learn self-defense while trying not to fall for her womanizing trainer. ***** When straight-A student Maddie is forced to move to LA, she plans to keep her head down, grades up, and make it through senior year as unnoticeable as possible. But when she stumbles upon an underground boxing match starring the intriguing Hayden Walker, she sees a chance to protect those she loves from her crazy, abusive father. She offers Hayden money in exchange for self-defense lessons, a dangerous arrangement that just might end up changing the pair of them forever. *If you aren't reading this book on Wattpad, it has been stolen. Please report the website!*