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Witchy Wishes for Christmas by LBraum
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There is a lot that can happen in the last days before Christmas ... especially if magic is involved. When her cousin gets herself into trouble, it falls on the young witch Maggie to save her from the fallout. Making shady deals with strange store-owners, struggling with her crush on the mysterious Aiden and having to face a not-so-wonderful Winter-Wonderland is only the beginning. In Maggie's family you stick together, no matter what. So when her cousin accidentally poisons one of their classmates it falls on Maggie to find a solution. If only she had known it would lead to one of the most exciting adventures of her life - and that she would finally learn more about the mystery surrounding her longtime crush. But will it also be enough to spark a relationship? Or are witchy wishes simply not fulfilled even on Christmas? *A Christmas-themed Novella with a word-count of 25K*
So Into You by ayee4bieber
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Natasha 'Nat' Bromley thought falling in love would be easy, she never once imagined that being in love would be so heartbreaking. Was this love truly worth fighting for? Did true love really conquer all? Her life would change forever all because she fell in love with Harry Easton.
𝐃𝐄𝐌𝐄𝐍𝐓𝐎𝐑 - A Harry Potter Fanfic by ohnion
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A girl finds herself turned into a dementor in Harry Potter's world -- where magic intertwines with danger. She needs to first make herself look presentable, and then what? Help out Harry Potter? Go enjoy her stay in Hogwarts? Or maybe lead an army of dementors and dominate the world? Of course not. She just wants to live a peaceful life and pray no one Expecto Patronum her. But then, of course, fate would never leave her alone. cover by @aeris- Highest ranking #187 in wizard Some strong language contained
1.2 | Highway of Lights ✓ by softyhartz
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In which Riley Ran's flight gets cancelled and goes on a road trip with Noah Clermont--a stranger she meets at the airport--before catching her next flight. While Riley finds Noah intriguing as she spends more time with him, she fears to be with someone; she has been alone for too long. But what she doesn't know is that Noah, himself, has to grapple with his inner loneliness as well. p.s. - this is a standalone!
Gone. by sstories429
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Grief is everlasting. Some say it gets easier with time. Some say that the pain lessens. I don't believe them. My grief and pain is still there every day, like a storm cloud following me. It doesn't get better. It doesn't get easier. It's all a lie that they tell you. When Kurtis died, part of me went with him. How do you get over something that was your fault? How do you move past the guilt that's gnawing on you with every move you make and every new person you meet? When my music was first released, I wanted to go on this journey with him and I wanted him to be my rock. My music career took off, and so did he. Just not in the way that I ever imagined. So, how do I continue to go on with continued popularity without him? But, another musician has entered my life: Harry Styles. He's happy and playful. He's excited about life and his passion for music inspires me. Can this person help to dig me out of this rut that I'm in? Can he help me find the light that has gone out? Awards: Third Place - The Constellation Awards 2020 Cover made by: @anticlimactic
The One Without Words by destacia
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"Go ahead," I said, backing up against the pink wall of the shop. "Do something other than glare at me." I waited. One, two, three seconds... and nothing. I raised my chin at him. "You're boring me, mute boy." He stepped closer. Leaned toward me as his gaze burned into mine. Then... ❀ ❀ ❀ After three months in juvenile detention, it's time for Romy Pereira to help out with her family's flower shop. And it's not all bad... until they hire Jack Michel to work beside her. He doesn't speak, communicating with glares and scowls instead of words, and seems to be more interested in literal rocks than other human beings. And with an ex-convict mother, her friends drifting away, and the flower shop falling apart, the last thing Romy wants to deal with is Jack's attitude. She'll forever praise the day he screws up big time and gets himself fired, but until that day comes, it's mostly one cold-hearted girl, her silent (but still infuriating) coworker, and a whole lot flowers. [word count: 100k] [originally written in 2014-2015; re-write completed 2020-2021] ❀ Rankings ❀ #1 in #badgirl #1 in #goodboy #1 in #flowershop #1 in #sociopath
A Deadly Game by AmansRose
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𝘼 𝙘𝙖𝙨𝙚 𝙩𝙝𝙖𝙩 𝙠𝙚𝙚𝙥𝙨 𝙢𝙪𝙡𝙩𝙞𝙥𝙡𝙮𝙞𝙣𝙜... Zara Crones, a strong and ambitious Omega with a troubled past, suddenly finds that her own backyard is piling up with bodies. And to make matters worse, those six bodies have only belonged to females, mutilated in a horrifying way. With panic beginning to grow from the general public, answers are needed and the killer caught. Fast. 𝘽𝙧𝙞𝙣𝙜𝙨 𝙩𝙬𝙤 𝙥𝙚𝙤𝙥𝙡𝙚 𝙩𝙤𝙜𝙚𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙧... When Nate Sanders, a highly decorative Alpha and one the Prime Minister personally recommends gets called in on the case, many expect for everything to be resolved. There has never been a case he could not solve... until this one. Mysterious things begin to happen when he's partnered with Zara, and willing to not lose the one partner he finally feels comfortable with, he's prepared to shield her from it all. 𝙊𝙣𝙡𝙮 𝙛𝙤𝙧 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙠𝙞𝙡𝙡𝙚𝙧 𝙩𝙤 𝙝𝙖𝙩𝙚 𝙞𝙩 𝙖𝙡𝙡. Yet the killer sets his eyes on another victim and this one is hitting too close to home. It's up to the powerful duo to stop him before things take an even bloodier turn. One that can't be brought back to life. - ☾ - Featured in ⇲ » The Warrior Goddess "|Women Of Mystique|" » The Reading Room "|Home of the Supernatural | Paranormal/Vampire/Werewolf|" » Romance "|Romantic Suspense|" » Adventure "|18 Romance Stories We're Obsessed With|" [WARNING: contains sexual, graphic, gore and violent content] All Rights Reserved. Copyright © 2020 by Elena Rose
𝐆𝐨𝐝 𝐈𝐬 𝐌𝐲 𝐎𝐚𝐭𝐡 |Jungkook√ by asli_niassuh
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A dare-devil commoner. A notorious, beastly Prince. His gentle brother. And an enraged Princess. When the four of them crossed paths, hell froze over. Oh, and a complicated love square between them was just a cherry on top. ♔◦☓◦☙◦♔ Gabriella Adler (Ella) was fearless, brave, and courageous. Nothing stopped her from grasping the Emperor of Dalia, King Ernest Haynes's attention in the most uncanny and daring of ways, not her gender and not her fear. Especially when he had the secrets and mysteries of her family buried deep inside of him. But that was just the dawn of the ultimate dusk that was about to blanket her skies. The everyday bickering collision with the bold, dominant, and teasing Crown Prince Theodore Able ( Jeon Jung-Kook) was not on her wish list; neither was falling in love at first sight with his charming and sweet brother, Prince Emmett Able ( Kim Tae-Hyung). Just when she thought life couldn't stab her with any more spears, came wrecking in the Dalai Empire's sole Princess, Irene Ernest( Bae Joo-Hyun). With a firm belief that she could put an end to the new-born infatuation that Prince Theodore, her love interest, had developed for Ella, Princess Irene vowed to pull them apart. Living together in a castle would have been fun if it weren't for Ella struggling each day to uncover her identity and if it weren't for the rest of them hiding a lethal plan up their sleeves. Things were deadly, and the mysteries unveiled were shocking. It was a dangerous game of chess and a fierce game of thrones. The first one to blink was the first one to lose. And the first one to fall in love was the first to slip away because the course of true love never does run smooth. ♔◦☓◦☙◦♔◦☙◦☓◦♔ Banners by : @sunalessiamoon and @LadySnowdrop
My Secret Mobster Boyfriend by AnnaKosalla
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**Featured by Wattpad NA Romance** When the paths of secretive businessman Dray and conscientious assistant doctor Cate cross once too often, they make a pact to solve their respective private life problems together. However, neither of them realizes that romantic feelings could develop between them, nor that their relationship is in danger of exposing a dramatic, long-forgotten family secret. And as if this wasn't complicated enough, a mysterious stranger suddenly appears in town who seems to be out to kill Dray. - A NA romance packed with a mix of comedy, drama, suspense, and a touch of destiny. ♡ Follow me on Instagram: anna.kosalla ________ "I only have three conditions: you'll accompany me whenever your presence is needed, don't tell anyone this isn't real, and don't fall in love with me." Dark prince meets diligent doctor: Cate needs a boyfriend to avoid dreadful embarrassment at her upcoming high school reunion. Dray needs to bring home a girl with marriage potential before he will be allowed to take over the family business. In the absence of better options, they agree to help each other, not knowing that their newly formed bond will bring back the threat of a huge family secret from the past. With them living in two completely different worlds, can this fateful deal work out or will everything just end in an epic disaster? And if Cate ever found out with whom she's gotten herself involved with, would a geek like her really be able to handle it? ♡♠♡ The Ruby Awards 1st place winner - New Adult The Platinum Awards 1st place winner - Romance The CB Awards 1st place winner - Romance The Noble Awards 1st place winner - Romance The Bloody Moon Awards 1st place for the realistic portrayal of fighting scenes ♡♠♡ Best ranking: #2 in darkromance #15 in dangerouslove #16 in comedy-drama #23 in badboygoodgirl #25 in familysecrets #28 in romantic-thriller ♡♠♡ weekly updates
Sunsets on the East by anticlimactic
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In a world ravaged by the aftermath of a global pandemic, society has finally reconstructed itself from near-destruction. Samantha Allegrano is studying at prestigious institution Ridgeview University, intent on finding a cure for the virus that nearly wiped out mankind, as well as an antidote for those plagued by its final stage: the Corruption. When her home sector is attacked by the Corrupted, Sam and her close friends plan to escape to the Capitol where they know an impenetrable fence can keep them safe from the undead. Everything changes when Sam makes a critical discovery that could save the planet. But at what cost?