Stuck in a faction she feels so lost in, Esca wants out. Will she succumb to her families wishes or will she follow her heart?

A brother and sister escape from an abusive father in Candor to the ironically daunting Dauntless compound. With only each other, they must fight to stay together, and to stay in Dauntless. The alternative? Become one of the factionless. (I don't own anything you recognize) I'm currently in the process of rewriting the first few chapters. Maybe possibly an Eric x OC, too.

Just a little thing I'm doing to hone my writing skills. This is strictly casual, I just need to practice writing good dialogue and imagery and so on. Comments would be nice just to tell me what I'm doing right or wrong.

[ON HOLD] Imara Ember was born Abnegation. She lives a simple, selfless life devoted to helping those around her. However, Imara feels as though she is an outcast in her faction. When the time for her aptitude test approaches, she desperately hopes her result will be different; however, in her case the results are inconclusive, labeling her as a Divergent. Imara, heavily thrown off by her results, has to choose for herself. She makes the conscious decision of choosing Dauntless, the faction dedicated to protecting the people. On the parallel end is Darcie Brenton, born of Erudite faction. Her aptitude test reveals that she is destined to be Dauntless. Despite her results, Darcie fears she is not brave enough to transfer due to the impounding pressure of her controlling mother. However, when she sees a fellow Erudite effortlessly switch to Dauntless, she decides to make the change herself. When Imara and Darcie cross paths in the Dauntless initiation, they find an immediate connection. They both share a goal of wanting to overcome their past and prove those who doubt them wrong. The two befriend Tobias and Eric, who are constantly at war with each other. Eventually and with much hesitation, they band together and form an alliance. Imara and Tobias, with their alternate thinking, begin to uncover secrets behind their faction system: every second of every day, they are being observed by some unknown power in attempt to find the perfect society for sustaining peace.

(Eric/OC) Tobias leaves more behind in Abnegation than just his father. When his little sister follows in his footsteps, he does what he can to keep her in Dauntless, and out of others' hands.

Airazela Matthews. With an IQ of 253, she is what every Erudite wants to be. But she isn't Erudite inside. Her aunt sees that, and accepts it, encourages it. But not her parents. Never her parents. But even so, Airazela leaves her home and goes to the place she belongs, carrying with her the scars of her past. Physical and mental. But even with them, she finds someone who looks past the outer shell and embraces the inside, the air within her. EricxOc FourTris AU - No war