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Continuum by paradoxqueen
Continuum
paradoxqueen
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  • Parts 9
|| SAMPLE - Full version published and available on Amazon || The cycle of life is a simple one: you live, you die, you're reborn as a completely different person, repeat. Every life lived serves its own purpose, and all memory of it is erased once it's completed. After a not-so-simple run in with a not-so-simple death bringer however, Sabina Kagan is unable to agree. Her life cycle is different from everyone else's and she isn't even aware of it, at least not yet. Her mundane teenage life is flipped upside down as she realizes that the people in her life aren't really who they portray themselves to be. In order to rediscover who she truly is, Sabina works alongside her ex-boyfriend, Elijah, to piece together her fragmented memory. Swaddled in the blissful embrace of ignorance, join in as she learns the truth of how difficult it is to escape the past. || Notable Achievements || • WATTPAD PICK - Featured on the Community Curator Reading List by @IdrisGrey • • THIRD PLACE WINNER - Fantasy Category of the Oldies Awards 2020, vol. 1 • || Highest Rankings || (7/23/2020) New Adult Fantasy - #1 Black protagonist - #1 Memory - #10 Soul - #10 Fantasy-Romance - #57
When Angels Fall by Mona_Amin
When Angels Fall
Mona_Amin
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  • Votes 401
  • Parts 49
(Book Two) Engeldom, a world where Angels rule while humans serve them as slaves. Alina risks everything for love, unaware of the grave danger she is throwing herself into. A danger that would take away from her everything she held precious, but that would also open the door to a great and an unexpected opportunity... Mikal had fallen in battle, left for dead, only to find himself waking up in the hands of the enemy. He could only count on one person to save him, except that this very same person had been plotting his death in the first place...
The Devil's Rose by Baby_Wolf_121
The Devil's Rose
Baby_Wolf_121
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  • Votes 305
  • Parts 32
It was time for Prince Deimos (Day-mose) to step up and become King of Xavaria (Za-var-E-a), but first, he needs a Queen. This is what led him to the Kingdom of Freyborne and how he met Princess Nesryn. There was something different about her that Deimos was drawn to so with one look he decided that he wanted to try to make her his Queen. Nesryn came with a warning, a warning that Deimos fell in love with and made him want her even more. Nesryn, on the other hand, wasn't so keen about getting to know the prince. He's a demon and demons are unpredictable and never do things in a typical way. Nothing good ever comes out of Xavaria. Will this be a happily ever after or will it be nothing but hell? * This is the first draft so all critiques are 110% welcome and everything is susceptible to change when I edit at a later date* The cover is made by @aeris- Check her out if you want gorgeous graphics!
The Last Princess // Book One by midnightcupofnoodles
The Last Princess // Book One
midnightcupofnoodles
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  • Parts 2
Ruthless Alphas, double crossing allies and one young princess thrust into their darkly seductive world. ╾─────╼ Princess Lyandra, the Grand Alpha's daughter, is facing the most challenging task of her life: finding peace between the werewolves and the humans. When a band of werewolves called the Crusaders threaten to expose their species, she needs to reclaim her right to be an Alpha while convincing the humans her people aren't the animalistic brutes of legend. Although she's been living among the humans for years, she isn't sure she's got what it takes, especially standing up to the Alphas. Thrust into a world of political intrigue, Lyandra is forced to accept the help of her mysterious mate Raven, a man she isn't sure she can trust. A story of love, duty, and death in a world on the brink of revolution. ╾─────╼ 𝗻𝗲𝘄 𝘄𝗼𝗿𝗹𝗱 𝗰𝗵𝗿𝗼𝗻𝗶𝗰𝗹𝗲𝘀// book one 𝗹𝘆𝗮𝗻𝗱𝗿𝗮 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗿𝗮𝘃𝗲𝗻// book one ╾─────╼ 𝘀𝘁𝗮𝗿𝘁𝗲𝗱// 30 March 2020, first draft completed on 16 September 2020 𝘀𝘁𝗮𝘁𝘂𝘀// second draft being rewritten 𝗴𝗲𝗻𝗿𝗲// urban low fantasy, romance, new adult, werewolf 𝘄𝗼𝗿𝗱 𝗰𝗼𝘂𝗻𝘁 𝗽𝗲𝗿 𝗰𝗵𝗮𝗽𝘁𝗲𝗿 // 1.5k to 2k 𝗼𝘃𝗲𝗿𝗮𝗹𝗹 𝘄𝗼𝗿𝗱 𝗰𝗼𝘂𝗻𝘁// 120k+ 𝘃𝗲𝗿𝘀𝗶𝗼𝗻// second draft, editing underway ╾─────╼ 𝗳𝗲𝗮𝘁𝘂𝗿𝗲𝗱// @werewolf @projectwomanup @undiscoveredwolves @action @YAFantasy @cupid @dangerouslove 𝗮𝘄𝗮𝗿𝗱𝘀// the dream awards 2020, prime awards 2020 final round, phantom awards, wicked awards, house spotlight at OlympusWriting 𝗿𝗮𝗻𝗸𝗶𝗻𝗴𝘀// #3 in kickass, #9 in starcrossed, #3 in assassin
I'm Not Dead by dontwalkwiththedead
I'm Not Dead
dontwalkwiththedead
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  • Parts 29
When the zombie apocalypse breaks out in New York, a heart-broken Rocco Maneli and his five dysfunctional younger siblings must do whatever it takes to get to Colorado. After an unexpected twist in the game of survival though, they learn there's a lot more to worry about than zombies. Can the Manelis work past their differences and learn to survive together? Or will they let their drama get the best of them and die as an alcoholic, failed musician, nervous nerd, pothead, gamer, and a baby? Survival isn't fair in this new world, especially when the Maneli's are involved. ~ Cover credit @WriterAnimated ~ (c) Copyright 2020 by Ria