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Quit Bugging Me oleh sandydragon1
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In a world where people are followed by animals that reflect their personality, Taylor is devastated when she starts being followed by companions of the creepy crawly variety. As her passionate science teacher's annual companion showcase rapidly approaches, Taylor's mind is abuzz with anxiety about what her newfound companions mean about who she is.
The Autumn Prince oleh FCCleary
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How do you cope with learning that your mother was murdered before you were born, your father is a fairy hitman, and you wield the power to raise an army of devoted love slaves... except you haven't the least idea how to control it? Tom Corwen's disability had driven him to excel, and in his first year as a grad student at Berkshire-Avery University, he gains the respect of his professors, a girlfriend way out of his league, and something close to a normal life. After meeting a perplexing stranger with a cryptic message about his mother, Tom and those close to him are trapped in a cold war between impossible kingdoms and marked for death by the world's most powerful Fae. ---------------------------------------------------------- The Autumn Prince is book 1 of The Meridian Covenant, a four-part adult series. It is being written live online, so please follow for news, updates, and changes. "A unique and heartwarming read..." ~ Ferrus Hooves Workshop "All my favorite genres set in an epic world..." ~ Llewellyn James (BR) "The world is subtle and complex. It's easy to mistake it for the real one." ~ Sean Collins (ED) "The book is perfection..." ~ Books Got Talent 2021 Royal Throne Awards: Second Place Adventure/Fantasy The Autumn Awards: Honorable Mention #Thegoldendandelionawards #fairies #fantasy #mature -----------------------------------------------------------
Sold oleh AmberDevroe
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Saiea craves control, but when she's put in servitude to a handsome dragon mage who possesses dangerous magick, will she obsess over gaining power or choose to surrender her control? ***** Restricted by her tribe leader father and betrothed to a man who doesn't love her, Saiea wants desperately to control her own life. She finds temporary peace running away to the forest where she dreams of choosing her own fate, but freedom turns dangerous when Saiea is caught by slave traders. Sold into servitude to a solitary, handsome, and mysterious dragon-mage Master who cares deeply for her, Saiea learns there are parts of surrendering control that she enjoys. But when she discovers a powerful object that gives her unimaginable control at a terrible price, Saiea faces a choice: surrender control or let the magick consume her. (A unique master and slave / ddlg style romance set in an original fantasy world. Sweet, fluffy, and introspective, Sold shows the dark side of being overly controlling and accentuates the fact that relinquishing control to someone who has your best interests at heart and truly cares for you can be a good thing.) (Highest Ranked: #1 in Submissive, #3 in Slave, #3 in Master. Winner of Cleaved Awards: Second Place in Romance.) (© 2018 Sonic_Books All Rights Reserved)
Chasing Sapphire  oleh GulinaRehman
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#12 in odd out of 4.3k stories. Royal army is after Sapphire after seeing her at ball, they are searching her because of her sapphire coloured eyes. Meet Sapphire an average village girl, living the fullest of her life, rearing cattle and working at fruit orchids, daydreaming about getting married to the love of her life. She have everything, she is satisfied with her life until the day she goes to the palace for ball and her life changes there. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This is not your cliche princess story from Disney. Get yourself ready for rollercoaster of emotions, unexpected turns, and uncover the real faces of sugarcoated people, face betrayal and decode the secrets.
fallen into sunlight oleh _trashmuffin_
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a collection of poems. i love you, dont forget it.
Hurters and Healers oleh lucysbadwriting
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People in the city think that all government decisions are public, but almost all of them are done illegally. Fight clubs were made illegal after the new city government was established, probably so that no one would find out about the one they created. Not only is the compound, the building we live in, illegal but most of the people in it were taken illegally. Of course, the government would never tell us this, so what happens when we find out anyway? We did what they trained us to do, we fought. And where there are hurters, there are healers. Highest rankings 23 in Alan- 5/31/20 52 in sixteen- 5/31/20
The Seasons of Sissera oleh Laentheon
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When Nokkland found himself setting off with the inn's barmaid to track down an ice-dragon, he hadn't realized that he would be thrust into the center of a prophecy he knew nothing about. Nor that he would become part of an undercover group of revolutionaries, determined to keep each of Sissera's five races from annihilating the others. He won't survive alone... A vagabond destined to be a dead king. A wayward elf with a knack for being in the wrong place at the wrong time. A lover attempting to play a game of chess with lives. A hot-tempered cupbearer who avoids mirrors at all cost. An architect who designs something much greater than a building. Together, they must play a treacherous game of truths and lies for peace assuming they don't cave into their own fears and split ways first. Note: this story is archived because I've decided to rework elements of it into another book I'm writing ⭐️ Winter Rose Awards 2020 Second Place Winner ⭐️ 💫 Red Cloak Awards 2020 Second Place Winner 💫 ✨ Bloodstone Awards 2021 First Place Winner ✨ 🌟 @YAFantasy, @Fantasy, & @SecretTreasures Featured Book 🌟 ⭐️ Kirrukan Awards Semi-Finalist ⭐️ Cover by me :) Season Dividers by the fabulous @cosmiicstaar
Exotic oleh lily_bee
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By day, Miles Stewart is your below-average high schooler. Flying under the radar by the seat of his pants, trying to get through each day without drawing too much attention to himself. By night, he transforms into Sephora Utah, a drag queen who rules the club scene. His expressive alter ego, under whom he can be fully himself, safe from judgement. Those two aspects of his life have remained seperate for almost two years. But this precarious balance is tilted when his double life is discovered by Caleb Proust, under compromising circumstances. Under threat of losing his anonymity and lifestyle, Miles negotiates a mutual agreement that if one goes down, so will the other. Because, of course, no one knows Caleb is gay. As long as Miles has that to hold over his head, he should be able to make it to graduation. Just so long as he doesn't go and do something really stupid. Like fall in love. ~~~ WINNER: The Dead Poet Society Awards by @The DPSociety 1st Place in Teen Fiction: The Mono Awards {Silk Edition} by @themonocommitee 2nd Place in Teen Fiction: The Summer Smoothie Awards by @PhantomUnicorn Featured on @cupid 's Reading List {Cupid in the City} Featured on wattpad's @YA Reading List {Clueless} Featured on wattpad's @generalfiction Hidden Gems Reading List (Wattpad Outreach} ~ ~ ~ COVER DESIGN by cil @sereneur
Reveille (The Hybrid Disasters, Book One) oleh LilyLong10
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When life gives you lemons, make lemonade. When life gives you altered, cross-supernatural species genetics, lay low and keep the things you learn about yourself to yourself. Surviving life as a college freshman is the least of Addy's worries when she discovers her oh-so-perfect father is not so perfect after all. Turns out he is a connoisseur in the "freak" department, and Addy is as freaky as it gets, all thanks to him. Join Addy as her deceptively normal world turns upside down, and the true nature of her existence breaks free. Addy battles to discover herself in the midst of her dastardly father's deeds, a secret government organization hellbent on keeping her on their team, and one hot supernatural she can't seem to get away from.
A Garden of Blood oleh AGardenofBlood
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In the realm of Palasia, where the Silver Church's iron grip extends across the continent, the conquered Illuri people still cling to the old ways, praying to spirits that have grown quiet. At the heart of this struggle are four souls bound by fate: Nodalen, a princess burdened by the weight of her bloodline and a legacy of obedience; Liwani, a boy worshipped as a living spirit among the Illuri, yearning to break free from the sacred expectations that imprison him; Clay, a young warrior trapped in the cruel affections of the corrupt electun, desperate for a chance at redemption or escape; and Mary, who views the world through a lens of survival, poised to defy the forces that would see her subjugated. The Silver Church drowns sinners publicly to cleanse them of their sins, wielding faith as both shield and sword. Yet even as their grip tightens, a terrible threat rises. The cult of the Lord of Souls, a mysterious order promising eternal life, begins to swell in numbers, sowing discord in a land already teetering on the edge of chaos. As rebellion brews and the Silver Church's gaze turns inward, alliances are forged in blood, and secrets long buried begin to surface. From the frigid dungeons of Silvertown, where sinners face their watery fate, to the sunlit shores of the Illuri, where ancient rituals persist, Palasia is a land steeped in violence and deceit. Kings and commoners alike are caught in a web of treachery spun by those who crave power and those who would see it crumble. As Nodalen, Liwani, Clay, and Mary navigate the ever-changing tides of loyalty and betrayal, they are drawn toward a reckoning that will test their resolve and reshape their fates. For within the shadows of Palasia lies a hidden truth, a place where all blood flows, where sins are sown and reaped -- a garden of blood that nourishes the roots of a darker age long prophesied.