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Unravel Critiques by viartist
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Macabre: the Gothic Boutique [1st draft] by gossamersilverglow
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[Original] Simon, a nerdy, agoraphobic wolf-shifter falls in love with a human named Annabelle who's more interested in her new employer at a local gothic boutique, James--a man who claims to be a made vampire. Even with all the weird happenings and strange unexplainable physical appearances of James's friends, it's only a spoof... right? At least, that's what Annabelle made herself believe until she participated in said spoof, choosing to experience the shift of a werewolf for Halloween. Seeing is believing. ::Warning:: This story is aimed at making fun of clichés and in some cases the cliché is purposely pushed over board. This is intentional. Eye-rolling will ensue. While it will continue to over embellish the clichés there is still an original plot... at least I think so. Hope you all enjoy. Updates? Will not happen anymore in this draft. To get new content you must read the 3rd draft. That beautiful cover was done by xXArachnidXx (http://www.wattpad.com/user/xXArachnidXx). This is the second cover done by by xXArachnidXx. Thanks so much!