oc reviews (CLOSED)

how to write sunshine boy's sunny universe. ━━ naruto guidebook & tips ━━ © kishimoto masashi, trendykids

Like the title states!

I'm not going to tell you you can't make your oc an uchiha. I won't tell you that an incredibly pretty oc is cliche (it's an anime fanfiction, everyone is good looking.) It really doesn't matter if you want to make your oc an overpowered ninja (naruto is one and people still like him). This is an actual guide on how to make a realistic naruto based original character, no matter what kekkei genkai you give them or how many people are in love with them. I'm focusing mainly on how to make your character seem as believable as possible.

Creating a character is a difficult process. Most people start with a name, others with a story concept. This book is here to help you, step-by-step, in creating or editing your OC. Remember: Every OC has the potential to be great. *Warning: Contains Spoilers*

I'll review your writing if you want. The needed info is in Chapter 1. There's a list in chapter 1 of what I'll accept. All rights to their original creators, of any story reviewed. All fanfic reviews also relate credit to the anime/manga original creators. Books are more than just black and white. -Anonymous [ ] Open [ X ] Closed for Catch Up [ ] Short Break until (Date) [ ] Temporarily Closed (No Set Return Date) [ ] Closed Permanently ^^ More info about this in Chapter One

This is actually my second OC review book. I'm remaking it because I'm not a dumbass bitch anymore. I mean I still am, but now I'm just a slightly better writer. So yeah anyways, submit me your OC's and I will review them to the best of my ability. No bullshit, no sugar-coating. If I like something, I'll tell you. If I hate something, I'll tell you. But hey, even if I do dislike your character, it doesn't mean they're trash. I'm not CEO of what makes a good character. So I hope my advice will be helpful to you. Oh yeah, I'll also be including chapters with writing and character advice because I see a lot of people on this site making the exact same mistakes and it makes me wanna shit myself. So read those if you wanna hear me go into rants about stuff in fiction that I hate. It might be entertaining. Here's some fandoms that I'm pretty knowledgeable about: Danganronpa Harry Potter Percy Jackson Avatar The Last Airbender BNHA FMAB HunterxHunter Game of Thrones Once Upon A Time The Walking Dead Attack On Titan Miraculous Ladybug (kill me) Warriors (haven't read them in a million years but I can give it a shot) Soul Eater Noragami Berserk Assassination Classroom One Punch Man Mob Psycho 100 Marvel Star Wars Lord of the Rings and The Hobbit Stranger Things Breaking Bad Original Universes

If you have any Fanfiction that you would like me to review then just comment on the first chapter. The rest of the information is in the book so please check it out thanks!

I'm just going to rant about things in Naruto fanfictions that annoy me. I'll also do OC reviews.

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