Fantasy Reviews [CLOSED]

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A Raven's Tale

Beneath broken stone and warped metal, a solitary raven panics as it senses imminent danger. It escapes certain death mere seconds before the structure finally crashes to the ground. On soaring above the devastation, the bird spies a wet-eyed woman, and her image is oddly emblazoned on its mind. Pulled inexorably towa...

Inner Monologue

An emotional rollercoaster experienced by an Indian juvenile is best described in this piece of work.....read to know more

New Year's Eve

Follow a couple's journey as they meet at the same place, the same time, every single year. Follow them through love, laughter, heartbreak and arguments. New Year's Eve will never just be a standard celebration for this couple. "Happy New Year, Scarlett." "Happy New Year, Robert." COMPLETED: 22/01/2014

No Rules To Love

Talia Jefferson has three rules in life: 1) Never settle for anything less than your best 2) Never doubt your own abilities And, possibly the most important rule of all: 3) Never- under any circumstances- fall in love Talia Jefferson is currently studying at Mountview Academy of Theatre Arts, one of the most prestigio...

One Shots + Scribbles

A place where I jot down extra scenes and new ideas!

Maid of Honour (The Wedding Series #1)

Featured in the @StoriesUndiscovered Tales of the Heart List September 2021 Felicity Park's wedding day is fast approaching and she's excited to attend to the last few errands with her best friend and Maid of Honour, Layla Connor. But when work unexpectedly calls Layla away on an emergency two weeks before the big da...

Follow the Arrow

John lives in a future run on smoke and contamination, where the freedom of thought has become an antiquated concept. Upon finding a note that tells him to "follow the arrow," John is lead into a natural sanctuary, and the sanctuary will force him to realize the deeper mechanisms of his world and himself. (1st place...

The Darkness Beneath

After the horrors of the Vanishing Act and the terror of the Violation in 314, what became of the monstrosities plaguing the tenants of The Villa apartments? One bystander is about to unknowingly stumble into some of those unwanted answers as one such monstrosity continues its hunt for victims. Lori is accustomed to s...

30 Days Ultimatum(COMPLETED)[✔]

This book is a RomCom book(Romance comedy). Read if you love laughing.😊 CURRENTLY EDITING AND WORKING ON RE-WRITING. PLEASE IGNORE SOME IMMATURE THINGS THAT THE CHARACTERS EXHIBIT. I'LL BE RE-WRITING THE BOOK AS SOON AS SCHOOL STRESS REDUCES A TAD BIT. Mia Montana has always had the fantasy of a perfect ever after. S...

Debbie's Vengeance

Fourteen-year-old Debbie isn't all that she seems. Her love for money is well-known in the neighbourhood. When she is arrested, accused and wrongly implicated in a drug deal gone awry, the law sentences her to a life in juvenile prison. Through her life in prison, Debbie learns that she is the long-lost heir of the k...

Dream with Me ✔️

*rewriting soon but chapters will not be taken down* College, the place where fresh starts exist. Where people don't know who you are and another chance to be someone new. In with the new experiences and relationships, out with the old. Though, a car knocking Aurora down head first was the last thing she expected to...

Obsolution ✔

Ty, a shift manager with an alcoholic wife, creates a female replicant in a dystopia veering toward full mechanization. For Ty, the surreal drudgery of working in a retail environment is interrupted when robotic interfaces are installed at his job. Any protest of the machines will prompt Prominents to place him in a r...

Shut Up and Pucker Up

Messy hair dancing like wildfire while her fist struck a guy's face again and again. A tall handsome man trying to stop her rampage was spotted in my sight. "Incredible" those were the words I whispered to myself. Was it love at first sight or does love have other plans for him?

1 | Gods & Monsters ✓

[Featured on WATTPAD PICKS] The last thing you'd imagine Earth's General having is an identity crisis, let alone in the middle of an interstellar war, but for General Avalyn Concerto she begs to differ. ⋆⋆⋆⋆ Ever since the last battle against Primord...

VIII

Henry Smith always felt like he wanted to something more in life. But he was constantly held back by his father. He was finally given a chance to break away when his best friend started a bet that had a reward that would let him finally escape. Will Henry be able to succeed? Will Henry finally be able to escape his fa...

The Wolf Among Us (Completed)

Estera Montenegro grew up knowing one thing: she needs to be a wolf to survive. As an Enforcer in her community, it's her job to face off with law-breaking members in an arena while citizens watch. But when fate takes a drastic turn, she finds herself injured and homeless. That is until she crosses paths with Magnus...

Plutonian

[THIS STORY IS FREE WITH EXCLUSIVE BONUS CONTENT] A fake relationship, a diabolical plan and a threat to the human race. The only thing that ties them together is an eighteen year old girl's choice, that could change the course of everything. *** Every year five hundred children are abducted from planet Earth and ta...

when cold sun meets warm moon( yizhan)(completed)

thousand years ago lost paradise was a very peaceful place . mediocre peoples and top clans were lived peacefully. but when two main clans (sun and moon ) started a war for administration of lost paradise , lost paradise separated to two pieces . since thousand years they are combating for destroy eachother. since the...

Broken World: Liars

Science Fiction about humans, aliens, their differences, and their conflicts. Mild "Humans are space orcs" elements. This description applies to the whole story, not just this chapter. Later chapters include violent acts and horrible people doing horrible things. The story is told by various characters in differing mo...

The Dream Factory

***A Wattpad Featured Collection of Short Sci-Fi Stories*** Strange sentinels, forgotten Gods, regenerated aliens, frozen predators, tele- kinetic chess sets - all this and more in this collection of short SciFi stories. Each tale carries a devilish little twist at its end. Like a box of chocolates some a...

Metal and Flesh (The Rohvim, Book 1)

Aeden Rossam: 17, son of a nobleman, expert swordsman, spoiled, let's face it: he's a punk. Betha Solvinstra: 18, common shopkeeper's daughter, rising star in the Society of Healers. Oh, and she hates the nobility. After the sword tournament in the city of Elbeth, the master healer--leader of the secretive Society of...

The Lost Children of Andromeda: 2052 Ends With Z

The year is 2052, humanity's last year on Earth. Natural disasters have ravaged the Earth leaving nations devastated, food and resources limited, and civil unrest rising among a doomed population crammed into claustrophobic cities. With only 215 days left until the apocalypse, Allister Adams, a young African-American...

The Golden Queen

The Golden Queen, Book 1 When GallenO'Day is hired as a bodyguard to escort a young woman through the woods to the forbidden ruins at Geata Na Chruinn, it seems like an ordinary job-but all too soon, he finds himself fleeing for his life from creatures that seem like escapees from a nightmare-the alien dronon, led by...

Obey or Die

When vargo Chester looks to uncover a secret government building He will find himself sucked in to a world in which he is left with only two choices Obey or die . Which will he chose .

Maniacs and masks

A chilling tale told using reports found by wicked individuals who helped Destroy a Human colonised Planet known as Vox Valliuence A planet that feared the different and in trying to contain and destroy what was different only destroyed themselves

Tales From A Galaxy Far, Far Away ✔️

A collection of Star Wars one-shots and Anidala love letters. *Warning: Tears may be a side effect of reading this book. A box of tissues is advised.* . . . [All Star Wars rights belong to Disney and George Lucas. I do not own any of the characters, only to plot-lines of these one-shots.]

Azira The Vampire Queen ✔

~•Featured in @WattpadVampires' 'Supernatural Crossroads | Paranormal' Reading List•~ ~•Featured in @WattpadDarkFantasy's 'The Bestiary' Reading List•~ ~•Featured in @WattpadRoyals' 'Fantastical Kingdoms and Beasts' Reading List•~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~◇◇~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~•Book 1 in The Vampire Queen Series•~ Being tortured and...