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How to End a Six-Year Relationship by Alegny
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Jules Martirez and Mikael Sarmiento were together for five long years. They have been together in all the challenges that life could bring. But due to unfavorable series of events, Jules wanted to end what's between them. Struggling, she doesn't know how to do her plans accordingly. She also doesn't want Mikky to feel bad. With all of these circumstances, could their relationship still be fixed or Jules will finally find a way to end their six-year relationship?
Scandalous Affair: Oliver Valez by CxlxrGreg
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Scandalous Affair #1 "Isn't the forbidden fruit the sweetest?" Liberty Kings is an alluring woman with her hourglass body, ombre blonde hair, and ocean blue eyes. She can hook you with just one look. Liberty wishes that she can get anything she likes as easily as she got men's attention. But reality sucks; it will slap you on the face. She went home to the Philippines to show her dad that she can be successful without his help. That was her greatest plan to get her father's recognition. But when she met this dangerously gorgeous man, she cannot take him off of her mind. She keeps on fantasizing about him, and she always found herself blinded by that man: forgotten plans, forbidden desire, and forsaken principles. How willing is she to sacrifice everything she has for him? How willing is she to succumbing the greatest sin she could ever commit? How much can Liberty Kings burn her soul for him? After all, we are sinners. Warning: Unedited. Highest rank: #4 in general fiction #1 in family problem and forbidden. #2 in r18 #3 in age gap Started: May 14, 2020 Finished: March 22, 2021
Farewell in Tears by MissBavarian
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Sabi nila, hindi lahat ng wakas, masaya. Sa fairytale lang naman may happy ending na kapag nakita mo na si prince charming, sa huli hahanap ang tadhana para magtagpo kayo at umibig sa isa't isa. Pero kung totoong buhay ang pagbabatayan, malabo. Malayo. Si Megan ay lumaki sa may kayang pamilya. Lahat ng kailangan at luho niya ay naibibigay ng kaniyang mga magulang pero ang pagmamahal at aruga mula sa kanila ay parang ipinagkakait pa sa kaniya. Napunan ang kakulangan na iyon sa tulong ng kaniyang mga kaibigan. Simula noon, marami siyang nagawang bagay na lingid sa kaalaman ng kaniyang mga magulang. Hanggang sa isang pagkakamali ang kaniyang lubos na pinagsisihan. Nagtiwala siya. Nagmahal siya nang sobra-sobra na umabot sa puntong wala na siyang itinira sa sarili. Iniyak niya lahat ng mag-isa. At siniguro niyang iyon na ang huli. Pero anong gagawin niya kung isang araw, dumating ang lalaking magpapatibok ulit ng namatay niya ng puso? Date Started: May 25, 2020 Date Finished: ------
Breakable Dreams  by twelfth_maurie
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Gretel Murphil doesn't know it, but she is a destructive weapon. Her life turns upside down when Hiroshima, her frail father, who was a scientist, refused to give up "The Masterpiece" to a burglar. Their small hut was ransacked, and Hiroshima was captured. Anguished, Gretel seeks refuge in Dome University, where Derren Watson, his father's confidant, resides. She is willing to do anything in exchange for her father's freedom. Thus, her journey to find The Masterpiece begins.
The Mono Odyssey by Avistelle
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•▪HIATUS▪• There, exist a world that is far contradictory for mortals. One believed that this world is a complete opposite of reality. The birth and death in life's journey are living in one harmony. No hell nor heaven. Only a world handled by a king who lost his heart whilst controlled by one esteem Goddess. Erika Kaho is just an ordinary high school student, contented living in a rural and destitute life. She never expects that her life will be twist after getting lost, leading her to an odyssey that she never wanted. _________________________________________ Genre: Fantasy | Mystery Language: TagLish Status: ON-GOING