Stories I have Critiqued
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Destined to Shine, or Maybe Not... by dreamer_98_catcher
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Have you ever been in a world where darkness reigns over light, where day does not exist, and the only source of light is slowly fading away? Leila lives in that world; a world of darkness, literally. Zakum, an evil prince takes control of this world, and captures Leila's family, and Leila knows that the real person they're after is herself. Leila was born special, with wings that rebel against darkness, and only she can stop Zakum and prevent the kingdom from total destruction and devastation. But can she? Or will Zakum take total control of that kingdom forever? Will she and the guy of her dreams, Jake find true love? Or the power of love be mercilessly engulfed by the darkness, evil and hatred that reigns in Leila's world? Leila has to find the courage and power to defeat Zakum and bring peace back to the kingdom. Once the moon, their only source of light, fades away, Zakum will have total control, authority and power of Leila's world forever and forever.... and Leila knows that time isn't on her side...
The Inevitable by TheLoneAuthor
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Silence. This was different. Not the silence where no one is talking, but the one that there is absolutely no noise what so ever. Was I even breathing? I opened my eyes. The first thing I see is a wall of pitch black. No other color. Only one word comes to mind. “What?” ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Chase awakes in a strange place surrounded by a wall of black void. Confused, and dazed, Chase must continue on to find out where he is, and why he is here. He soon comes to find that the answer is inevitable. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The awesome cover was done by NataliaHunt, so shout out to her.
Sexual Confusion (Poetry) by Pookes
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This is my self biographical poetry... About my homosexuality. ~ Pookes