Critique
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We are Myth by SevenSlashes
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The Chiaroscuro are a legendary set of twins, said to change the world. They are rumored to be beings of great power, children of the Archangel Raphael, who feed on the light and darkness in one another, and together they would destroy the world as we know it. Except, it's not a myth. The Chiaroscuro are real. The government has kept them apart for generations, fearful of them and the damage they would do to the empire that they have created from the dust of what was once the Land of the Free. We are not free anymore, and those of us who believe are desperate for The Chairoscuro to come save us. Despite what they tell us, we believe that they will come for us, and bring an end to the Tashian reign. *****NEW CHAPTER EVERY WEEK(at least)***** All critics welcome! This is a rough draft, and every comment, suggestion, and critique will be taken into account for later chapters and/or the polished draft to follow! Officially submitted into the #Wattys2018
Snow Space by ItsAGoodLife
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Born and raised into a life of crime, Khamil Brooke tries to escape his roots as he develops a budding romance with a girl on the other side of town. When the whole world seems intent on keeping them apart, Khamil turns his anger to a rival gang - and he slowly becomes dragged back into a world of danger. Contains strong language and heavy drug reference
Lesbian But Not (Lesbian in an all boys school) by YuriFlores6
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A lesbian in an all boys school filled with hot guys? Lisa is a straight girl mistaken for a lesbian and is forced to spend her life in an all-boys school with her parent's permission. Guys think she is gay because she is disguised as a boy but she acts like a girl. Yandere character CHECK! Bad boy CHECK! Reverse Harem CHECK! Handsome and hot guys, ABSolutely yes! But behind all of this, an evil lurks beneath a girl who knows about everything even the fact that she is inside a story.
My Boyfriend Has Wings by H_Ryker
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When Faith stumbles across a fallen angel on the verge of death in the woods, she decides to take him home and hide him in her bedroom until he recovers. She soon finds herself lovestruck by the seven foot tall, muscled, miracle-with-wings. But after a series of unexplained events, she begins to wonder, is the being from Heaven truly her guardian angel ... or the devil in disguise? Updates every 5 days or so :-)
Roses and Candles by aldeneil
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The letters written for my first. An encounter from a dream that could've been more but never progressed far enough to be a happy ending; A collection of scenes, not enough to create a movie, that's settled in the depths of my beating heart; A string of notes just missing a few more to make a melody, but special enough to rouse my soul that was fast asleep; That's you, Max. 2nd place- The Albina Awards: Teen Fiction 2nd place- Chaos Awards: General Fiction Highest Rank (General Fiction)- #154 [2018.01.02]
Recovering Akira by kab9991
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"Her life was perfect, despite the fact that she was miserable." Akira has a perfect life aside from being incapacitated by depression. After a suicide attempt lands her in a hospital, Akira learns to navigate through life after surviving suicide.
Kaleidoscope (discontinued) by PensAreCool1
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Young Alyssa knew that she was due to be kicked out of the home eventually, she just wished that it wasn't so soon. To make matters worse, the obnoxious and telekinetic person by the name of Jay isn't the greatest roommate.
Anything But Perfection by RahniaForever
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Jeremy and Alison have been in love since they met, ten years to be exact. They're together just like they've always wanted to be but the worst part is -they are not happy. They used to be but that changed when a horrible incident changed their lives forever. Despite of the shock Alison went through she gets even more confused when Jeremy starts to ignore her. They feel like they're drifting apart. Now after a year, they're like strangers and their relationship is withering. Alison is desperate to make it right and save their relationship but that is when one day she bumps into a stranger. Could this be the starting of something new? Find out what happens when pain and pleasure collide. It is anything but perfection. Cover made by the awesome @queenofbel-air
The Whispers Within by AERETHCSWINDEN
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When River Barnett's perfect life betrays her, she suddenly finds herself running back in the direction from which she came. Ashamed and lost, she is faced with a family she hasn't seen in a dozen years, and a town full of familiar faces. River wants nothing more than to find the headstrong, independent version of herself who stalked off the farm and headed to the big city twelve years ago. What she doesn't realize is the person to help unlock everything she misses about her former self, is the one person who has himself changed the most. Or has he? As the past catches up with them, with a heart scarred by betrayal and lies, will she be able to stand strong and trust in love again? *************** The Whispers Within has been recognized in the following contests: Third Place Romance - The Golden Star Awards - October 2017 Third Place Romance - The Discourse Awards - October 2017 First Place Romance - Athena Awards - September 2017 Second Place Romance - The Crayon Awards - August 2017 Third Place Romance - The Psyche Awards - August 2017 Third Place Overall - The Blue Rose Awards - July 2017 First Place Romance - The Blue Rose Awards - July 2017 Third Place Unknown Author - The Blue Rose Awards - July 2017 Second Place Romance - The Beauty Awards 2017