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We are Myth tarafından SevenSlashes
We are Myth
SevenSlashes
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The Chiaroscuro are a legendary set of twins, said to change the world. They are rumored to be beings of great power, children of the Archangel Raphael, who feed on the light and darkness in one another, and together they would destroy the world as we know it. Except, it's not a myth. The Chiaroscuro are real. The government has kept them apart for generations, fearful of them and the damage they would do to the empire that they have created from the dust of what was once the Land of the Free. We are not free anymore, and those of us who believe are desperate for The Chairoscuro to come save us. Despite what they tell us, we believe that they will come for us, and bring an end to the Tashian reign. *****NEW CHAPTER EVERY WEEK(at least)***** All critics welcome! This is a rough draft, and every comment, suggestion, and critique will be taken into account for later chapters and/or the polished draft to follow! Officially submitted into the #Wattys2018
Not Her (GxG) ON HOLD tarafından warwithlove
Not Her (GxG) ON HOLD
warwithlove
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**SLOW UPDATES** "You think you have a right after what you did? And coming back to this school? Who do you think you are? Stay away from us. Stay away from my brother!" Olivia Peters has never been one to follow the rules. Yes, she's a good student and makes her parents proud but she is attracted to the outsiders. Moving to Washington DC and transferring to North Ridge High School is not how she imagined her sophomore year to start. Soon establishing herself among the popular kids, Olivia is watched like a hawk for what she does next. Unfortunate timing brought Olivia together with North Ridge's staple outcast Nadia Grant. Liking the mysterious girl and her elusive vibe, Olivia pursues her. But why do all her teammates look like they want to kill Nadia? Follow this story of love, heartbreak, pain and a shocking secret that might just break the school apart. *EDITED BY @ALVEONACY *COVER MADE BY @silver_lining86 *
Snow Space tarafından ItsAGoodLife
Snow Space
ItsAGoodLife
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Born and raised into a life of crime, Khamil Brooke tries to escape his roots as he develops a budding romance with a girl on the other side of town. When the whole world seems intent on keeping them apart, Khamil turns his anger to a rival gang - and he slowly becomes dragged back into a world of danger. Contains strong language and heavy drug reference
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Lesbian But Not (Lesbian in an all boys school) tarafından YuriFlores6
Lesbian But Not (Lesbian in an all boys school)
YuriFlores6
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A lesbian in an all boys school filled with hot guys? Lisa is a straight girl mistaken for a lesbian and is forced to spend her life in an all-boys school with her parent's permission. Guys think she is gay because she is disguised as a boy but she acts like a girl. Yandere character CHECK! Bad boy CHECK! Reverse Harem CHECK! Handsome and hot guys, ABSolutely yes! But behind all of this, an evil lurks beneath a girl who knows about everything even the fact that she is inside a story.
My Boyfriend Has Wings tarafından H_Ryker
My Boyfriend Has Wings
H_Ryker
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When Faith stumbles across a fallen angel on the verge of death in the woods, she decides to take him home and hide him in her bedroom until he recovers. She soon finds herself lovestruck by the seven foot tall, muscled, miracle-with-wings. But after a series of unexplained events, she begins to wonder, is the being from Heaven truly her guardian angel ... or the devil in disguise? Updates every 5 days or so :-)
Roses and Candles tarafından aldeneil
Roses and Candles
aldeneil
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The letters written for my first. An encounter from a dream that could've been more but never progressed far enough to be a happy ending; A collection of scenes, not enough to create a movie, that's settled in the depths of my beating heart; A string of notes just missing a few more to make a melody, but special enough to rouse my soul that was fast asleep; That's you, Max. 2nd place- The Albina Awards: Teen Fiction 2nd place- Chaos Awards: General Fiction Highest Rank (General Fiction)- #154 [2018.01.02]
Recovering Akira tarafından kab9991
Recovering Akira
kab9991
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"Her life was perfect, despite the fact that she was miserable." Akira has a perfect life aside from being incapacitated by depression. After a suicide attempt lands her in a hospital, Akira learns to navigate through life after surviving suicide.
Kaleidoscope (discontinued) tarafından PensAreCool1
Kaleidoscope (discontinued)
PensAreCool1
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Young Alyssa knew that she was due to be kicked out of the home eventually, she just wished that it wasn't so soon. To make matters worse, the obnoxious and telekinetic person by the name of Jay isn't the greatest roommate.
Anything But Perfection tarafından RahniaForever
Anything But Perfection
RahniaForever
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Jeremy and Alison have been in love since they met, ten years to be exact. They're together just like they've always wanted to be but the worst part is -they are not happy. They used to be but that changed when a horrible incident changed their lives forever. Despite of the shock Alison went through she gets even more confused when Jeremy starts to ignore her. They feel like they're drifting apart. Now after a year, they're like strangers and their relationship is withering. Alison is desperate to make it right and save their relationship but that is when one day she bumps into a stranger. Could this be the starting of something new? Find out what happens when pain and pleasure collide. It is anything but perfection. Cover made by the awesome @queenofbel-air
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