I don't know what I'm doing

I'm making this and don't know what I'm doing lets see how this turns out!

Hi I'm a new cover designer but please stop by at my shop and allow me to try and make you one also I would love it if you guy could tell me how to improve on me design So if I've done something wrong with your cover or maybe just it could be better pleasse tell me and I'll try to improve it

Hi @covercrew members I'm a manger and here's my book basically if you have any problems ask me I'm always happy to help 💮kyrah💮