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4 stories
Play it Again by GunpowderAndLead1
GunpowderAndLead1
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Follow the story about a down home country girl, Kennedy Monroe, who gets an unexpected encounter with the sexy and mysterious cowboy, Brett Jones in a beautiful town outside of Nashville, Tennessee. As their romance continues to blossom, fires try to burn their bridges and tear them apart. Does their love story end with a happy tune or does it go down in flames, literally? "Play it Again," their love song written into a story. CopyrightA© 2015 GunpowderAndLead1 This story is dedicated to my country man, Jay.
The Edge of Honour by story234
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Morgan and Gorran had never dreamt of working for the CIA or MI5 and why would they? However, when the two young teenagers discover that they possess super powers, they vow to use their gift to protect their countries. They are blissfully unaware of the kidnappings, shoot-outs and betrayal that lie in their wake. Morgan and Gorran are on The Edge of Honour, but a single false move could send them hurtling into oblivion.
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Mystical (Mystical #1) (Revising) by ArielleWeekly
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Gentle ripples passed over her, a watery caress that contrasted with her growing unease. Blinking slowly, Eliza tried to make sense of her situation. She found herself submerged, an unexpected aquatic world unfolding around her. Panic crept in as her ankles remained bound, immobilized as if by an unseen force. An attempt to move her arms yielded no results - they were ensnared in an unyielding grip. Seaweed, sinuous and trailing, wrapped itself around her legs with an almost possessive hold. Every movement was thwarted by the constricting tendrils, her struggles mirrored by the rippling sea plants. An urgency to breathe set in, her chest tightening in a desperate plea for air. But the very element that should sustain her had become a stifling barrier. A strand of slimy seaweed clung to her lips, smothering her mouth and nose. It seemed as if the water itself had turned against her, a sinister transformation that threatened to consume her.
Survival by Voyageavecmoi
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Violent disasters rage across America and society collapses. The living fight against the clutches of natural disasters and disease in a post-apocalyptic world. A militaristic group gathers survivors by any means to rebuild a functional society with the shards of the last, but its intentions are not as they seem. Survivors in this crumbling society need the wit and skill to make it or face the consequences. [This story is rated mature for strong language, drug and alcohol references, scenes of a sexual nature.] Cover made by theotherday. Thank you!