I wrote this story when I was in 2011. You can see that I lack writing skills back them. Yes, one chapter has a "love scene" that was actually explicit in the original. Then when the story was released, I deleted that scene and replaced it a new one. Now, I reverted that scene back but it wasn't very detailed unlike the original. I kept the original story and I rather not change it. I did not add anything (although I edited some of the words) on it. I'm also planning to remake this and make it a visual novel (using a visual novel maker). The whole story is based on the anime Kanon.