Critique Shop✨
9 stories
Hunter's Mail ( COMPLETED) by gril18
gril18
  • WpView
    Reads 12,483
  • WpVote
    Votes 1,588
  • WpPart
    Parts 28
|COMPLETED | R18 | MATURE CONTENT| Ang buhay ng tao ang higit na mahalaga. Lahat ay nakahandang itaya para sa buhay na hinahangad nila. Ano ang gagawin mo kung may natatanggap kang hindi inaasahang liham? Paano ipagtatanggol ang iyong sarili sa taong hindi mo kilala? Makakaya mo bang ipagsawalang-bahala ang banta sa iyong buhay? Kung ang kalaban mo ay walang pagdadalawang-isip na pumapatay? Warning! Mature Content
The Latter by Sera_001
Sera_001
  • WpView
    Reads 1,147
  • WpVote
    Votes 636
  • WpPart
    Parts 9
A daughter who thought she was deprived to find her love and happiness. (/¯◡ ‿ ◡)/¯ ~ ┻━┻ Will change it soon~
Ang Simula ng Kwento Nating Dalawa by francescadcn
francescadcn
  • WpView
    Reads 5,806
  • WpVote
    Votes 1,931
  • WpPart
    Parts 60
Kailan ba kita unang nakita? Kailan ba kita unang nakilala? Kailan ba kita unang nakausap? Saan nga ba tayo nagsimula? Ah! Naalala ko na. Sa dulo. Sa dulo tayo nagsimula. "I cried almost every night after the day you broke up with me and tonight, the last teardrop shall be the last one that I will shed for you. Because, clearly, you're not worth it. Ayaw mo ng serious commitment? I didn't ask you to marry me," nanginginig ang boses na sabi ko sa kaniya. "I'm just too immature to be committed at the moment. I'm sorry." Matapos noon ay tumayo siya at naglakad palayo. Palayo nang palayo. Palayo sa taong pinangakuan niya dati na hinding-hindi niya ito tatalikuran.
A Yellow Flower with A Red Tip  #Mus-alomlynAward20 by Simplicityiscute
Simplicityiscute
  • WpView
    Reads 19,073
  • WpVote
    Votes 12,520
  • WpPart
    Parts 38
In a room full of lies, they thought running away from the past would hide their deceitful secret. *** Cindy Perez is a joyous person who loved her family dearly, especially her twin, Catherine. She never wanted to be a disobedient daughter nor the black sheep of their family. Until one unfaithful day, an incident ruined their happy life. Cindy's last smile to her parents wasn't a sunset. It was an eclipse, the last eclipse, noon dying away to the darkness where there would be no dawn, yet a possible miracle happen. It's the new beginning of her life, a life full of lies. Her parents hid her true identity but the truth would always chase her. Does running away from the truth would save her? Impressive Ranking - #1 on #torpe - #19 on #beginning - #31 on #flower - #3 on #ruined - #201 on #red - #160 on #lovable - #159 on #amnesia - #424 on #goodgirl
Legendary Warriors: Thief of truth by TheGlassofSunshine
TheGlassofSunshine
  • WpView
    Reads 2,163
  • WpVote
    Votes 894
  • WpPart
    Parts 18
"The mind is like a parachute, it works best when it's opened." - Prof. Lee ------- She's just a simple girl back then. A happy go lucky shay. That has one goal and that is to make those people pay for degrading her She thought that the destiny is on her will but then, she lost her track. ----- "Come back to me, please." "We are not meant to be together." "I know. 'Cause we are destined to kill each other" ----
Fallen Flower  by JackenJill_
JackenJill_
  • WpView
    Reads 16,213
  • WpVote
    Votes 8,888
  • WpPart
    Parts 60
"Pain makes me stronger. Tears makes me brave" -Valdez 🔹➖🔹➖🔹➖🔹➖🔹 ACTION/NEW ADULT/ROMANCE STATUS: COMPLETE | UNEDITED Started: 041519 Ended: 071520 Cover by: @MizzyFantasia
Into Existence by Pann_yera
Pann_yera
  • WpView
    Reads 8,767
  • WpVote
    Votes 1,814
  • WpPart
    Parts 45
"Isa ka lamang perpektong kuwento na isinulat ko, hindi ko lubos aakalaing isasabuhay ka ng mga marka ng tinta ko." Paano nga ba kung ang mga imahinasyong isinulat mo ay magkakatotoo? 'Sors fabulam scripsit vobis'
Blood That Counts  by made_sense
made_sense
  • WpView
    Reads 1,116
  • WpVote
    Votes 248
  • WpPart
    Parts 11
Masayang namumuhay si Doly kasama ang kanyang minamahal. Ngunit nagbago ang lahat ng dumating ang pangyayaring hindi niya inaasahan. "Sinunod ko siya, nagpaka alipin ako dahil sa matinding pangungulila." Muli bang babangon si Doly o mananatili na lamang na nakakulong sa pag-ibig na matagal na siyang nilamon? "Gagawin ko ang lahat kahit pa ang kapalit nito ay maraming buhay." Start: June 4, 2020 End: June 28, 2020 Best in horror Under M&M's Book Awards 2020 Highest Ranks: 192 Realization 641 Memories
Escape Room by UnnieChieWa
UnnieChieWa
  • WpView
    Reads 2,730
  • WpVote
    Votes 538
  • WpPart
    Parts 23
A squad of YouTubers are searching for an idea for their new content to make. An advertisement popped out on their computer screen that piqued their interestーEscape Room. A challenge that trends today where you need to escape by finding clues and unlock the room. Will they manage to escape or be locked there forever? ••• cover by: MizzyFantasia