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The Fire by westhereader
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"A fire occurs whenever a combustible fuel in a presence of oxygen at an high temperature becomes gas." In my situation, a use-to-be-wonderful night became the heat and oxygen, the person I love and cherish became the fuel. That night, a wild fire spread through me, burned my soul, changed my persona and left nothing but my dead body. 08|25|20
The Daughter Of The Raven by westhereader
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A supposed-to-be-happy night became a terrifying night to her because of the death of her beloved father. Years flew fast... She started doing her own investigation all by herself. While investigating, she unknowingly saved a life, a precious life of a lawyer who will offer her a hand. Will she accept it? Or leave it hanging? In the middle of solving the case, she will face many obstacles stopping her from uncovering the truth, at the same time, she will meet new faces that will help her or will cause the death of her. In the end, a explosion will occur to shock them all, bodies will be shattered while a Raven will rise up above the clouds. 07|28|20
Darting from Reality by Joytan_26
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Avyanna ran away after doing something terrible. She swooned in the middle of the forest and when she wakes up, she found herself inside the school named... Arcane Academy, a hidden school that only a few know about. It's a mysterious place where students are trained to discover and develop their abilities. She postulated that probably this school is where she truly belongs. Soon after, she became a student of Arcane Academy and that's where her story begins.
Stay No Longer [Editing] by Nabi-Pluma
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"'Di ba nag promise ka? Na hindi mo 'ko iiwan... 'di ba sabi mo 'di ka gagaya kay Papa," sabi ko habang tumutulo ang mga luha sa aking mata. "Sinakto mo pa talaga sa birthday ko, 'di mo man lang inisip 'yung mararamdaman ko," dugtong ko at tuluyan nang umiyak. "Sorry Reema... but I need to do this," he said and gave me a kiss on my forehead. "Before you leave me, just think of what you promised to me..." bulong ko habang pinapanood siya na naglalakad palayo sa'kin, sabay sa pag alis niya ay ang malakas na buhos ng ulan. ━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━ ★⬤★𝐒𝐓𝐀𝐘 𝐍𝐎 𝐋𝐎𝐍𝐆𝐄𝐑★⬤★ ┃﹋ꔸ𝗈𝗋𝗂𝗀𝗂𝗇𝖺𝗅ꔸ﹋┃ ━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━ 𝖲𝗍𝖺𝗋𝗍: 𝖩𝗎𝗅𝗒 7, 2020 𝖤𝗇𝖽: (𝖶𝖺𝗅𝖺 𝖺𝗄𝗈𝗇𝗀 𝖻𝖺𝗅𝖺𝗄 𝗍𝖺𝗉𝗎𝗌𝗂𝗇, 𝖼𝗁𝖺𝗋𝗈𝗍!)