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An Affinity Within Stars by ravenoirev
ravenoirev
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"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." Aprielle Castellano was determined to commit suicide by jumping off the bridge, letting herself drown, and die with her lungs filled with water-well, not until this blue-haired guy appeared out of nowhere, accompanied by a vintage Volkswagen van and a mouth blurting out philosophical words. • • • Five different strangers ventured into an escapade with no exact destination, driven by the desperation of finding themselves again. Each one of them had their issues with life and its significance, but one thingʼs for sure: they all want to be healed, to forget their scars, and to be free from wounds. The eagerness of seeking for their own lost souls, which they believe are found in the stars, is it really worth the risk? Or will they just waste their time looking for it but in the end, they can never escape their cruel realities? Can five insignificant existence find the right road? Their own philosophy about stars created a connection within them-a strange affinity. But what really are the stars? What is its metaphorical symbolism? Despite the uncertainties of their purpose and path, will you take the risk, leave those scars . . . and take the road to the stars?
The Last Chapter(BOOK 1)_ Complete by 7teenz
7teenz
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"Gusto lang kita pero di kita mahal" Aniya nila masakit raw maiwan pero na try niyo bang papaniwalain sa kasinungalingan?. Ako si Athena isang babaeng naghahangad na maging manunulat pero manunulat mismo ang ibinigay sakin. I met him unexpectedly but he also disappeared when the time came. How do I face tomorrow alone? Can I stay until the last chapter? 📌This is a teen-romance ~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~••~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~• This is a work of fiction. Names, Characters, businesses, places, events and incidents are either the products of the author's imagination or used in a fictitious manner. Any resemblance to actual persons living or dead, are actual events is purely coincidental No to plagiarism!!! - Author's note: Ito ang unang kwentong ginawa ko. Kung may napapansin kayong typos at grammas error ay nawa'y pagpasyensyahan ninyo. I-edit ko rin ito kapag may oras ako. Don't expect too much kasi I'm still learning💖☺ Baka di ka matanggap sa langit. chour! - Keep chasing your dreams. Nothing is impossible with God💖 -Xyrize