The original story is a rating of an 9.5/10 not saying it was bad just my personal opinion. I think it was maybe because I hated the fact that why does it in most storys the "original" heronie truns out bad, I think that it was predictable and unfair. So I wanted to rewrite it my way, I will try to match up the story as much as possible just differently with my own ideas. I want this story to talk about different poit of views cuz I do feel bad for Yvonne, I want this story to show you that you can't judge someone for what they became until you understand their side of the story. [Note this is just for fun don't come at me!!!! PLZZ!!]