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Paint Strokes by ChrissSister
Paint Strokes
ChrissSister
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  • Parts 1
Dreamer by JMAheart
Dreamer
JMAheart
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  • Parts 2
Imaginary friends at age 5 ; cute. Imaginary friends at 17...?
Luna Brown- Ignored, Forgotten by EllieTyler562
Luna Brown- Ignored, Forgotten
EllieTyler562
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Luna Brown has been treated like an outcast by her parents for her whole life. Now they're gone and she is plunged into a world she never dared to dream about. Can her life become perfect? Or is that just too much to hope for?
Through Metallic Gold Eyes (On Hiatus) by alieangeles
Through Metallic Gold Eyes (On Hiatus)
alieangeles
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Fifty five years ago, Marphibian X was first spotted in a single citizen of the United States of America. Although this genetic mutation was proved not to be contagious, it slowly began occurring randomly in the bodies of thousands of citizens, something nobody could explain. According to research, Marph X makes a change in your cells, dramatically increasing your strength, speed and intelligence while also ridding you of any feelings or emotions and giving you the unbearable urge to murder. With so many people turning into Marphibates at once, that's when the Marphibian X Outbreak started: humans vs. Marphibates. In the end, with the help of technology, humans proved to be the more powerful race and wiped out the Marphibates until there were none. Although the war that lasted a year left the country destroyed, it was slowly reconstructed as the Protected States of America. Now, in the year 2089, thirteen year old Whilemina Frewer has been diagnosed with the Marph X and is sent to be killed for the country's own safety. The government may think she's a Marphibate, but Whilemina's older sister, Ryba, is convinced that there was a mistake and plans to get her back home..until she makes an astonishing discovery about these Marphibates that changes her life. COVER BY: SamantaN
(On hold) 5 Chances To Charm by CKat95
(On hold) 5 Chances To Charm
CKat95
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  • Parts 3
When Coleson Jones, the boy Liza hates most, offers her a way to possibly never have to speak to him again, she thinks she has come across the deal of a lifetime. All she has to do is go on five dates with him and if her feelings about him do not change then she will never have to speak to him again. Sounds easy enough, but will it be as simple as she thinks? And for Cole will five chances be enough to make her fall in love with him?