My Reflection (The Attys 2012)

This is a poem I wrote when I was going through I really difficult time and I wanted to know if it was good or not so tell me what you think.

Off The Pole

Lily Regan's a stripper that ran away when she was fourteen. On her break she gets arrested and in the cell across from her is her brother that abandoned her when she needed him most. Will she accept him back in her life when he tries to get her off the pole? Or will she keep dancing for ones?