WARNING: Profanity is used in this story.
Give me advice on how to make the story better (this is my first story.)
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Makayla is a fifteen year old girl who moves to Atlanta over the summer. At her new school she bumps into a boy who she think is cute but she doesn't know how dangerous he is. When she gets involved in a gang will things get hard for her?
16 year old Kapree always had a crush on her 19 year old brothers bestfriend named Chris who's 19. Her brother never wanted her to be around when Chris is around. Chris always shows that he's Kapree's big brother but once Khalil isn't around it's a whole different ball game. Do you think Chris and Kapree going to sneak around?
A 17 year old girl named heaven meets this nice cute guy named jay(the biggest kingpin)and they end up in a relationship and she let him take her virginity then something goes wrong and they break up a few weeks later.He starts rapping and gets famous and she finds out she's pregnant with His baby and tells jay but he denies her baby beacuse he thinks she trying to get back with him.
Finds out what happens next
Love, even when it seems forever, never lasts too long. Through all obstacles "love" is supposed to always be there. That's what Tierra thought. until now.