I'm not the best writer and I know it. But I have been told that I am "good." So I've decided to write down and little tips and whatnot. I even "borrowed" my dads book of words. It has a bunch of papers in it. So, I hope this helps!
I stared at the man who'd kidnapped me, my heart pounding. His green eyes burned me. Burned me until I was nothing but ash. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sadie Mills wanted nothing but to accomplish her dreams of becoming a world class ballet dancer. All her life she had worked hard to reach where she was now. She was clos...