was listening to staying up by the neighbourhood. mentions nightmares. game is a nightmare and scary and i love it. entered contest. boomzies. yeona, riley main characters 2 killers; ghost and idol

This is to help me edit my story and fix things up! Just to clear that up. Before I describe it, I have a few pointers. One, this is not yet finished. I started working on this book December of 2022. It is only halfway done, so do not expect an ending for the time being. Two, this might get published one day, but I am not so sure. Any pointers would be greatly appreciated before editing. I am a young writer, so some vocab/descriptions could be off, my apologies. Now onto the description!: This game happens every few years, the generations of new born children taking the responsibility. 40 people under the age of 25 are selected every new game. They must take the challenge before returning, allowing a final choice. Some people get notified years before, some way after. Typically a fourth back out, and another fourth of the contestants die. But once you are in... there's no going back. Filled with many different perspectives, bound to death would be a good read if you're into murder scenarios or gruesome betrayals. Anyhow, please give any necessary feedback, I'll try to update every week.

the games -- open for critique (chapter by chapter ill put more) this is a temporary cover and temporary title! Ophelia and Zephyr are two complete opposites, united by the games that only happen every decade. They're both descend from poor families, unable to support themselves. They find themselves in the most serious situations, but make alliances and even enemies along the way. What really happens behind the scenes? Read as I publish to find out more!