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Remenisce [hunger games/werewolf] by julianacampbell_
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"Jude is just a girl, but she will have to become so much more if she wants to survive." Welcome to Demetriss,heaven for Vampires, hell for Werewolves. After the Vampires and Werewolves battled in the great war, the Vampires have been in charge. To punish the Werewolves for their war crimes, they created the Remenisce Games, where 20 wolves from the 20 packs-10 girls and 10 boys, are forced to fight to the death. When Jude is chosen, she knows she wont be able to survive. Will she die, or will she find the strength to fight?
Crave | A Niall Horan Fan Fiction by onemorenight_
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crave; feel a powerful desire for She was frequently labelled a player, but that was untrue. She didn't set out to hurt anyone, she simply went after what - or who - she wanted, getting drunk on the power that came with it. He was the happy-go-lucky guy that tended to shy away from woman, unaware as to how sexy he was. They were completely different yet somehow, they were exactly what each other craved.
Straight in a Crooked World (Teen Fiction/Dystopian) by BiancaAlexisTaylor
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The city of Solae was the last to be purified. The goal of the Confederacy, the ruling order of the scattered cities that form their territory, is to create a purified world. We are not sure what goes on inside the walls of the Conversion Jail, or who makes the rules we follow, but they are supposed to be helping us. Therefore, I keep my secret a secret. However, like Isak Dinsen said best, "In the mind and nature of a man a secret is an ugly thing, like a hidden physical defect." Except, my secret is a defect.