Alfine Stories

Yeep this is a writing noob just writing out fan fiction like normal. I know there's a lot of newbies on here and the last thing you wanna read is some choppy crappy work right? So if you do have advice or plain out aubsoultly hate something please message me, so I can grow. I am very willing to take harsh criticism buuut if your being a dick just for the sake of being a dick you can go suck said dick.