Ancientbloodlines Stories

I squeezed my fists together and clenched my teeth. I couldn't think like that. We have fought this dark entity off for centuries, we can do it again. I took one more glance at the map before forcing myself to look away. I walked across the room to the dust layered case patiently waiting in the corner. The blade within still managed to gleam under the lights of the study even given my negligence towards it. I opened it and picked it up. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jack is like every other kid. He has weird friends and everyday bullies. He even has a crush on a girl. To him the only thing extraordinary is that he goes to a high school that only allows in the best, but is that really true? All of a sudden the principle dies and the librarian goes missing. Jack feeling something off goes snooping only to find a book. A book in which won't open. As Jack finds out that things aren't what they appear and people aren't who they think they are; he grows steadily closer to his destiny and who he truly is. The only thing is, is that Jack has save the people he loves and his school if he even wants to survive to the end of the school year. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ So I've been remaking this story three times now and each time I'm not happy with the result. This time though, will be my last, if I'm happy with it or not. However, I decided to involve people. Through my entire story I want you guys to critique me. I really want the best for this book and I feel like it will be better with more people. So I would like for you to comment on this story about anything you don't like to just pure brainstorming. In this story you will be writing it with me. P.S. This story is written in a guys point of view there will be mild mentioning of sexual stuff, but it will hold no actual sex. It will also have some cussing in it and obvious violence. I will not make this PG, it is for teenagers and up so if you don't feel comfortable with this content don't read please.

𝐒𝐞𝐫𝐚𝐩𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐚 𝐕𝐚𝐥𝐞 𝐗 𝐀𝐝𝐫𝐢𝐚𝐧 𝐃𝐮𝐬𝐤𝐛𝐨𝐮𝐫𝐧𝐞

"Some inherit wealth, others inherit a burden of truth." In 'The Secret Box,' a young man is left with a cryptic legacy from his late mother-a box sealed for a year and a warning that curiosity might be his undoing. What begins as a search for family history spirales into a dangerous journey through ancient ruins and forgotten bloodlines. He soon discovers that he is not just an heir to a name, but the guardian of a power that could reshape destiny. Some secrets were meant to stay buried; others are waiting to be awakened.

They were never supposed to belong. Now they might be the most dangerous ones there. Harriet and Makesha Seals have spent their whole lives feeling... different. But nothing could have prepared them for the moment their powers awakened-and a mysterious letter pulled them into a hidden world buried deep within the mountains. A world where magic is inherited. Power is ranked. And bloodlines decide everything. At the academy, the rules are clear: Branchlings-those without known magical lineage-are meant to survive, not stand out. But the twins didn't get the message. Because Harriet's power doesn't follow rules. And Makesha's control is hiding something far more dangerous than anyone realizes. As rival families begin to watch... As whispers spread through the halls... As quiet enemies start asking the wrong questions- It becomes clear: The system didn't misplace them. It buried them. And now that they're rising? Everyone wants to know what they are. Some want to use them. Some want to expose them. And some... Want them gone before the truth comes out. Because in a world built on bloodlines- the most powerful secret... is the one no one saw coming.