First of all I love Zalfie and I love Zoe and Mark's friendship so dont get me wrong its just a story that I think about for a long time I read alot of story's like this but I think something is missing about them so I tried to add them.(Btw my english is not awsome so sorry about that.) I hope you like it bye!
She walked down the narrow stretch of beach, sharp rocks to her left, water to her right. Small crabs scurried about everywhere but largely avoided her: given her relative size, she might prove to be a very problematic predator. Better to steer clear.