Brackenreid Stories

My 14 year old daughter wanted me to write a story based on two of her favorite characters in two of her favorite tv shows. The characters are Gibbs from NCIS and Inspector Brackenreid from Murdoch Mysteries. They lived in different times, and I went the ghost route rather than time travel. I'm considering expanding on the story, because there are obviously gaping holes, and I was just trying to get the story done during my week or so away. Let me know what you think! Parts 1-4 constitute the original story.

Post marriage to Darcy, Julia finds out William has left.