Brutallyhonest mga kuwento

A story for a dainty girl like me. Actually- For all readers who's mentally and physically fuck up.

DISCLAIMER: These review/critique things are based on first impressions. I will NOT be reading the entirety of your book. My purpose is to urge my clients to learn something new about their story. (Though opinions may vary across participants.) Maybe your review from me will be the catalyst that makes you quit writing for a period of time. Maybe my review is the confidence boost you need in order to take that next step. Maybe my review will help you see your errors and better yourself. Maybe it will do nothing to help you at all and you'll just think of me as a turd after. My goal is not to tell you how to think; I am just a milk dud trying to do something semi-productive as I procrastinate away. Also, in no way am I implying that I am a superior writer to any of my clients, I'm just bored & have attained a decent critical eye on picking out "the bad", I think. We all have written garbage before (you might be writing one right now and have yet to realize it! Who knows-- let me help you find out!), this is just a process that has been done a googolplex amount of times throughout the centuries and the multiverse. This is not unique to only you. It is just a cycle, and you are part of it, which is why I am here to shove you along in one tiny portion of it. If you think that I'm a "rude bitch", all of this seems too intimidating, or maybe even melodramatic--I get it. To a certain extent, I even agree with you! You know yourself better than I do. Remember: no one is forcing you to request and I'll have less reviews to get to. 🤷🏾♂️ {P.S. Super depressed and poor so I'm prone to take breaks. Oops. Edit: On an indefinite hiatus if that isn't obvious. All posted reviews have pretty helpful info in them I like to think tho!} Okay, I'll quit the foreplay and get on with it. I hope you enjoy my services whether you request or not! (Cover done by yours truly)

BEFORE YOU READ....KNOW THIS.... 💮 I know that it is wrong to write a romance story with a criminal facing years in prison for the killings of his parents that is helped alongside his twin brother. 💮 I am sorry for writing this in advance 💮 And come on....he is flipping hot, cute, handsome. =========== "Why did you do it?!" I yelled quite scared of my loving and caring and good listener and happy boyfriend, Eric Mendez, to the point where I couldn't even look him in his eyes...be touched by him (in any type of way)...love him at this very heartbreaking, terrifying, scary, horrific, tear-jerker moment. "I am sorry!" Eric croaked as his brother was pacing around knowing that he has to now face the consequences of reality. "You killed your fucking parents." I gulped looking upon their dead bodies laying in the family room, breathless, unmovable, saddened, blood oozing out from them. "I am fucking sorry, okay!" Eric yelled unapologetically and angrily and frasturatedly and everything else accompanying it. I stood shocked and horried at the way he said it and that I finally realized that he is truly a psychopathtic psychotic psycho person. "Lemme hug you, babe." Eric whispered as I had my head held down looking at the floor and my feet in guilty and being sad. "No." I don't manage for the simple stern statemented word to come out loud enough for him. I then suddenly feel someone's two strong arms wrap around my shaky and undying body. "Shhhh." Someone sounded out hushing me while stroking my back, neck, arms, waist, butt, legs, back of my head, and hair lovingly. "I-" I croaked out all of a sudden letted the flow of my salty, dried, unwanted tears to flow out of the tearducks of my eyes. "Shhhh. Shhhh. Shhh. I am right here." The person who I remembered I was fighting with and who was so cold-hearted to kill their own parents and who was my boyfriend hushed me after saying that he kissed the side of my forehead in a caring and loving way.

Wanna know whether your story is a great catch or a dead fish? Well, you've come to the right place! There are a lot of review books out there that will give you feedback on your whole story... but this isn't one of them. This review book is solely for the purpose of letting you know whether I would keep reading your book past the first chapter. It's simple: I read the first chapter of your story and then I tell you if it hooked me and reeled me in enough to keep me interested in the rest. Are you up for the challenge? Do you think your story has what it takes to survive the test? If so, open up this book and dive right in! And please, don't expect me to go easy on you. **This review book is heavily inspired by @Wimbug and their "Evil Reading Request List" book. If you haven't, you should definitely check it out. It's hilarious and quite insightful. Plus, she is an amazing writer herself, so check out her works! ;)**

Just me ranting about certain things going on in life, whether it goes on with me personally, or what I see from the outside. I can probably fill a whole library full of rants, but imma just chill because (ain't nobody got time for that)

*Closed* I reserve the right to reject stories I think are inappropriate! I will only read up to two chapters and vote on them if I like them.(: don't be offended by your review.

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Her world was turned upside down when she met him. 𝐇𝐞𝐫 𝐊𝐢𝐧𝐠. 𝐇𝐢𝐬 𝐑𝐨𝐬𝐞. ⋅ ⋅ ── ✧ ── ⋅ ⋅ 𝐀𝐋𝐀𝐍𝐍𝐀 is the Princess of The Charleston Royal Family Dynasty. Growing up with 3 brothers and an immensely powerful father, she had always been in their protection. However, after she's suddenly abducted, abused, and left in complete solidarity, she's assigned a bodyguard. He's tall, italian, devilishly handsome and a pain in the ass. The two become inseparable. She was surrounded by werewolves left and right. But He was the only wolf who had permission to be in close proximity to her. Not that he needed it. She found herself drawn to him, like a moth to a flame. He knew they were meant to be. Because she was his 𝐦𝐚𝐭𝐞. Family secrets. Romance. Friendships. Betrayal. Death. Will they be able to accept their love as soulmates? ⋅ ⋅ ── ✧ ── ⋅ ⋅ ─ "𝐇𝐞 𝐬𝐞𝐭 𝐟𝐢𝐫𝐞 𝐭𝐨 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐰𝐨𝐫𝐥𝐝 𝐚𝐫𝐨𝐮𝐧𝐝 𝐡𝐢𝐦, 𝐛𝐮𝐭 𝐧𝐞𝐯𝐞𝐫 𝐥𝐞𝐭 𝐚 𝐟𝐥𝐚𝐦𝐞 𝐭𝐨𝐮𝐜𝐡 𝐡𝐞𝐫." 𝐚, 𝐢 𝐡𝐚𝐭𝐞 𝐞𝐯𝐞𝐫𝐲𝐨𝐧𝐞 𝐛𝐮𝐭 𝐲𝐨𝐮 𝐬𝐭𝐨𝐫𝐲 <𝟑 this gonna be an emotional rollercoaster, so grab your tissues. © thehalokid 2022, all rights reserved started ─ 1st May 2022 ongoing ✎

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• Rant book • Brutally honest • Strong-minded • Don't care if you disagree with me or not

"A writer hopes never to offend, but if he must, pray let him offend the gods before the reviewers." ― Chila Woychik, On Being a Rat and Other Observations If you're looking for an honest review, this is the perfect review book for you...but beware of honesty because I am brutally blunt. I tell the truth, the whole truth and nothing but the truth!

Yeah, I have no idea why I called this "giraffe reviews." I don't even really like giraffes. Anyway. This is, pretty obviously, a review book. WARNING: I will be brutal.

That is, until she met Kira. Kira was a wolf hybrid that moment on, Kya was smitten. All credits go to the Artist