Bushwalking Stories

Introducing the spirited and curious 11-year-old Arianna, a girl with a heart full of wonder and a mind eager for adventure! Join her on an enchanting journey as she embarks on her very first magical bushwalking adventure.

OK so this isn't a fanfic but I can change it if you want. Its a short story that I wrote for a competition a couple of months ago and I would like some feed back for it. I will happily edit it if you would like it!