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This is one of the first stories I'm getting serious with. I enjoy getting criticism so rant away at the story so I know what to fix. Also please bear the first couple chapters. They were the first thing I've ever written in the past four to five years. I have to say that chapter three is where the improvement in writing shows a little.

Any girl of sixteen always dreams of getting her first "serious" boyfriend. So she can actually experience the hard grip of true love. But Miss Victoria Night has already had that feeling for a while. But even though she's already felt that strong emotion, she's never experienced something as strong as death in it's cruelest form- when it takes away the one you feel strongly for. When death's hand claims Jack Sommers after Victoria moves away, she's crushed. But not for long... Because he's began reappearing and it's not in his normal form. He seems a little... transparent. Aren't ghosts transparent? AUTHOR'S NOTE: This story will be updated every day of October because it is my "October story." The date in the story is not the same date as the chapter. Each chapter title is the date it was posted. Then you'll know whether to expect another update that day. This story is in the Watty Awards 2011. Your votes/tweets/likes/comments/fanning is very appreciated.

These are the events of what would have happened in an earlier and alternative script for Toy Story 3...

I was boring and I decided to have a random Disney character generator pick some characters. yall are gonna hate me for some of them but remember that my hands are tied

the story of a boy named hiroki mori abandoned by the people he loved. as he gains a system that helps him get stronger he walks a path that will be filled with despair

When your the eldest son of tai its hard to work towards your goal your goal is to become a elite solder for remnant not on one side for everyone But it's hard when your father beats you and your mother neglects you .what happens when enough is enough ? ( I DONT OWN RUBY , Rainbow six ,art or music I put in this . I got inspired by The operator by @mako_zero_one If your reading this and a chapter is too similar to yours i will change it I try to be different. )

****ATL FANFICTION********** SEQUEL TO My Life Isn't complicated.. Sarah Dawson's life has always been a little complicated and its about to get 10 times worse! ..... ______Please Read My life isn't complicated.. if you don't, you will be insanely confused.. Thanks! :D

Charlotte's life is pretty simple. Great friends. Amazing boyfriend. Freedom from over-bearing parents. When her best friend finally seals the deal with her crush of a lifetime, Charlotte thinks nothing can go wrong. If only she knew just how stupid a thought that was. With Alex, she isn't sure where she stands. She's even less sure of her feelings for him. And his feelings for her. Can she throw her perfect life away, all for the sake of her best friends boyfriend?

oi this is my spam book, aka the holy bible despite the fact I'm an atheist. Oh I rate animes and stuff. Obama hamburger sussy balls

piaj is crazy

A series of stories

Cancelled arc??

A mixture of random analysis, one-off stories, poetry and more, what else is there to it?

my opinions :3