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181 Stories

  • The Gap: A Leora Dane Case File by lurenah76
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    A woman slips in her home. A tragic accident, everyone agrees. Except investigative consultant Leora Dane doesn't believe in accidents. She believes in gaps-the invisible spaces between what people claim happened and what the evidence actually shows. When called to the Harper house, Leora reads something others missed: a coffee table moved deliberately, grip marks that don't match a fall, a staged scene hiding months of hidden knowledge. What appears to be a simple accident is actually the violent climax of infidelity, secret tracking, financial control, and a confrontation that spiraled into something no one intended. But proving it means pushing back against institutional pressure, institutional machinery, and a case everyone wants closed. One interrogation. One chance. No margin for error. Leora Dane reads crime scenes the way others read faces. She finds the architecture in the gaps. She sees the invisible pressure that breaks people. And she won't stop until everyone else sees it too. --- **THIS IS A COMPLETED MANUSCRIPT** - I'm seeking beta reader feedback before submitting to publishers/agents. If you love crime investigations, psychological tension, and unreliable surfaces hiding darker truths, I'd love your honest thoughts. **What I'm looking for:** - Does Leora's voice work for you? - Did the pacing keep you engaged? - Did the interrogation scene land emotionally? - Any plot holes or inconsistencies? - Your gut reaction to the ending? Comment as you read-all feedback helps! Thanks for being part of this journey. ❤️ --- **Genre:** YA Mystery/Thriller/Crime **Status:** COMPLETE (45K words) **Content Note:** Themes of domestic control, violence (not graphic), grief
  • Dating My Girlfriends Brother by ASimpleShadow
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    Matthew Vanomen, is a freshman at his new school, he meets a beautiful girl named Maria. Her Japanese older step- brother is homosexual and has his eyes on the younger freshman. Who will win Matthew's heart?
  • The Dome City by Meemee1978
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    It's so hot, what is going on. Is it even humanly possible to sweat this much?" Oh, but the temperature is just perfect "Who is that? Wait, you can hear my thoughts? Where am I?" As I open my eyes, I realize I'm not on my bed or even in my room where I should be after coming home late last night. "Or did I not make it home? This is definitely not earth" I said to myself as I looked around and took a 360-degree view of what I can't even describe. "Is this is supposed to be a house? Where am I?" Beautiful isn't it? This could all be yours if you want, or whatever change you want to make to it, just think about it, anything you want, anything you can think about, it's all yours. "This voice again, who are you, where are you?" I shouted out and waited for a response but to my disappointment, I heard no reply. "Beautiful?" I said to myself as I looked around, "Is this not more than beautiful? The whole building is made of glass, pure crystal-clear glass." I looked around and studied the cube like structure made entirely from glass and if my eyes were not deceiving me, was also rotating slowly. "But how is that possible, I'm standing on a fixed spot and not feeling any movement, also the darkness that totally surrounds the glass building isn't allowing me to determine if the building is really rotating or not. What kind of confusion is this?" All that surrounded the glass building was darkness, black thick darkness. What is this cube even built on? No foundation? It's just hanging in space? What is this darkness? How is this crazy heat not even destroying the glass cube? This is definitely not a building. Is this still Earth? Several questions rushed up my mind as I surveyed the area I turned away from all these questions and the surroundings of the cube as no one was going to answer my questions. The glass beneath my feet felt cold as I tried walking and that just added to the weirdness of the place.
  • Los Angeles Car Accident Lawyers by czrlaw
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    Have you been injured by a negligent driver? If so, then don't hesitate to seek legal representation from an experienced personal injury attorney. We help you get the maximum compensation for your injuries.
  • Delivery by ryankelly4292
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    Jackie is the only person in her town who will deliver food to a certain family. Here is one such delivery.
  • Cerebral Palsy ➳ irwin {au} by lololhood
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    ❝I swear I don't know what's happening to me.❞ ©lololhood2015
  • COME INTO MY WORLD AND SAVE ME by NonverbalPuffball
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    Come into my world Come into my heart
  • There, in solace, moved by thoughts, I consumed, by Twootopia
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    kinda sad. a little metaphorical lol.
  • Cutback by breckinridge
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    20-year-old Thomas doesn't like anybody during his year abroad - or in general - except his roommate and best friend Errol, a future movie star and the not-so-secret love of his life. After living together in Brussels, the two set out on an extraordinary summer odyssey across Europe that stretches the nature of love, friendship, and dependence - until fame, fortune and the real world get in the way. If you've ever wondered what's really going on inside the mind of an introvert - or if you've struggled to explain it to someone else - you won't want to miss this deeply personal (and darkly humorous) look into the true nature of personality and human connection.
  • Path of Change by Eunacis
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    "Whenever magic is concerned, being pedantic is a virtue." With these words, Cecil Meyers embarks on a life shaping journey through himself and his society. A story I wrote awhile ago based on a random idea. My first (and so-far only) High Fantasy story. Also I have a lot in mind for the world this is set in.
  • SIN UN FINAL FELIZ by Ren_Cambridge
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    Esta es la historia es la que muchos conocen como Caperusita Roja pero sin un final feliz. <<Derechos reservados, cualquier similitud es mera coincidencia, no se permiten adaptaciones>>