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it kinda sucks lol, short story Something has happened to the 3 sisters of Xhuang Empire.

Sun Wukong, a legendary hero known as the Monkey King or The Great Sage has been known as the most powerful immortal being to ever existed. In one particular day, has been ever known as the great war at the Jade Palace. Sun Wukong, an unleashed rampage has he started above the clouds. Everyone, gathered up their weapons for the battle of the life time they will receive. Every immortal having to gather together to defeat Sun Wukong for the final time. One of them immortal was also called in for battle. That one immortal, was other than a worrier spirit Fox. Known as Alya Kitsune. As she gathered her weapon and face off the monkey. Within the heat in battle, will she defeat Sun Wukong or be deafeted?

This is the tale of a young boy who embarks on an adventure to save his village from dark magic. Follow Li on his adventure and experience the power of The Leaves. I am entering a writing competition and this short story is going to be my submission. I came up with the concept and wrote this in a single day. The theme is "Journey" I would love some feedback and reviews; please enjoy!