Constructivecriticism Stories

Some common errors found in fan fiction

Good day, my friend! Have you wandered into my humble treehouse in search of a review? Ah, I see-you've come to the right place. Here, at Nandashree's Review Shop, you will find a review as honest as the whispering winds among the leaves, for we forest dwellers are bound by truth. Does that frighten you, dear traveler? Fear not, for honesty is the root from which growth blossoms. If you possess the courage to examine the fruits of your labor and shape them further with care, then step inside.

Here, I review YOUR books and stuff!

This is a snippet from my NaNoWriMo novel, The Carleton House. The protagonist here is Joan Strom, wife of Roy Strom Sr., mother of Roy Strom Jr. The family has recently moved in to a new house in Fort Huachuca, Arizona. Based on a true story. Trigger warning: slightly spooky Also, constructive criticism questions.

Do you want your story to be reviewed? Do you want that review posted for all of the G/t Community (and random Wattpadians stumbling upon this) to see? Do you want to find a new g/t book, but are too lazy to scavenge through the thousands of stories on Wattpad? Well look no farther! You have come to (or stumbled upon) the right place ((*to be read in the rushed narrator voice of commercials listing all the negatives of a product* do be aware that this product may take multiple weeks to be shipped out into the world of the internet. There are no refunds of your purchase. Any support questions should be directed to either the @ElisaGrim account or @GtCommunity. Response is not guaranteed. Side affects may include: loss of hope, crushed dreams, inflated ego, maniacal laughter, aching face, tears, increased view and read and comments and votes on story, mention of your name and story, motivation, loss of motivation, life, comments of "this gives me life" and "thank you" spouting from your mouth and fingertips, death, social death, formation of dreams, exploding chest syndrome, grinning, dancing like a psychopath, screaming, squealing, and growling))

Looking to get more reads and votes? Heavenly Book Club offers you just that considering the fact that you're a dedicated person. HBC is open to writers and readers of every genre. There is no discrimination, come make friends and share the love in our book club. Recently moved from @zoyelle50 and admin @_brebear_ Writers: 19/50 Readers: 3/50

We want to read your story, we don't know if you want to know what we really think about it 😗

There's a legend about a cornfield. It is said that the corn glows at night, pale and blue like the moon. Of course, this isn't a legend for Morgan, she's seen this glowing corn and heard of this tale. The part she hasn't heard, that someone in there is waiting for someone to stumble into that cornfield. Problem? No one's ever stumbled out.

This isn't a story. Just a little PSA for the people on this platform.

OPEN In which we give honest reviews and share our donut obsession

Hello, everyone! I've judged in many awards and I have a lot of reviewing experience (reviewer in 4 review shops so far). I used to accept review requests at my personal account and I thought that it was time to have everything organized in one book. I'm not an expert but I'm willing to read your stories and help as much as I can. I hope I won't disappoint you.

Where you can have your books reviewed! CLOSED FOR CATCH UP - due to the major success of the book so far (there are too many requests for our single reviewer), hope you all understand!

Kind of a rant book, except I give actual ways to improve your writing instead of bitching about it.

This love letter is dedicated to the one and only XxDiamond_GodxX. You inspire me so much as an author, with how attentive you are to your readers, so I felt like I should somehow repay you for your consideration and efforts. Please accept this small token of appreciation as my way of saying fu- uh I mean, thank you.

Each Chapter is a different story idea, but none less important than the others! Some may be shorter than others, though. Each idea is labeled as the main character's name, unless I already have an idea for the title. Some are Fantasy, some Sci-fi. The genre will jump around from story to story. Feedback please, if I get enough good feedback on them I may try to write the full story. They aren't technically short stories, but it fits the best. If you think I should expand on them, comment below, and I'll make them a full story! Or, if you have a story idea you'd like me to write, comment below, and I'll try!

Welcome to our Wattpad review shop! We offer honest and constructive feedback on your story. Simply submit your story and we'll provide you with a detailed review. We're here to help you improve your writing skills and achieve your writing goals. 🐋🫐💙

in which the admins host a BTS book comp! open to enter!

me reviewing your books! [CURRENTLY CLOSED DUE TO INFLUX OF REQUESTS] my credentials: a peter parker imagines book with far more attention than i expected, a crappy oc book, not even a high school diploma, and an anxiety disorder with a splash of adhd! that's really it lol let's get it!!

Итак. Я здесь не с целью оскорбить вас или унизить. Я здесь для того, чтобы помочь вам самосовершенствоваться. Я не буду присуждать вам баллы за успехи или провалы, я попытаюсь указать на ваши ошибки. Да, я могу где-то быть строгой, но поврьте, это будет для вас же лучше! Ваш Критик-Без-Имени.