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Just a random book filled with my artwork.

Set fifteen years after an ultimate battle unleashing powerful magic that unleashed ability for every to have powers or eventually develop or be born with them. An unusual child told prophesied not to have 5 or 10 but all kinds will have to awaken and learn his powers to stop an imposing threat that won't just destroy powers but anyone else who can use them. Though he would be placed under protection a certain protection of siblings and their partners in marriage, they vowed never to tell him until he turned 14 and was in high school surrounded by friends and family. The name of this child: Zero

This is an Azur Lane fanfic with OCs BTW. 3 sisters: Hobart, Brisbane and Sydney of the Hobart-class of Oustralira. In a port somewhere in northern Queensland. The year is 2041, or the year the 2nd wave of kansen really begins. There will be a lot of swearing. And most likely there will be Bloodshed and SEX (or Cumshed if you will).

This is a story that I had to write in History based on a writing prompt. It turned into an angsty mess and I apologize for any confusion that may result from this. The prompt was to write 1 page of a story from the point of view of either a wounded veteran returning home from the American Civil War, a planter whose plantation was destroyed, or a freed slave acquiring help from the Freedman's Bureau. I chose the first one. Warning: blood and gore mention, early PTSD signs, combat descriptions, graphic descriptions of injuries and violence Let me know if you guys want to see this turned into a full 3-part story