Annessa_A_Small
I personally rate this as a story that requires parental guidance if the reader is under 12, the cause for general concern mainly being the moderate use of strong language, gory content, and profound (if not long winded and dramatic, I may add with a laugh!) declarations of affection.
In The Making, a Summary:
Prophecies have been composed from the premonitions and prophetic accounts of many thousands of people over the span of millions of years. The end result of them all is the same:
Someday, a child of true Aisling heritage will come to power. This individual will rule steadfastly with justice, gentleness, and honor. A peace will come to the land during this reign, one so lasting, depending on which version of the tale you hear, that all will be at rest within the land.
Nezaria's corrupt court refuses to choose a new king until the current one dies; Boz has hired cutthroats and assassins to secure its own selfish trade interests, no matter who their network harms; and Icri's people as well as weak government continue to deteriorate in the famine that is affecting all three kingdoms within the Alliance due to their declined pleas for assistance. Nezarian king Giyro lies ill, and it's no secret that it could be a plot made by the mysterious Prince, or the slow poison commonly used by a rising criminal organization led by an insane pyromaniac mage.
The lost heir to the Aisling throne returns to the castle, and the Nezarian court is thrown into muted, murderous chaos. Painted faces and brightly colored clothes prove to be poor armor in the wake of deadly shadows...
Ugly truths thrust unto light, debts paid in blood, and evil deception an ever-present factor in these chronicles; not for glory or riches, but for the good of others; but most of all, to uphold justice.
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