Craftingfanfic Stories

A portal ripped the sky in half..... Lightning struck as day became dark..... Steve got lifted into the sky's and disappeared. Everything went black..... Hey Guys!!! For any curious reader this is my first book!!! Leave comments so I can note what to change or include. Ideas are also great!!! Please like!!! I spent days on this so if there are any grammar mistakes or auto correct being stupid please comment me to change it!!! ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) Anyone is welcome to comment me a name to add to the story. Minecraft users will be a lot harder so please give me simple names or first names.