Critic Stories

Since Wattpad's User profiles have a limited amount of characters allowed all information needed for Rules, Requirements and other things will be listed here, in The Critique Rule book.

In this book I will write about my favorite gay, yaoi, boyxboy stories. I will include mangas, wattpad stories, web stories, published books, dramas ect. If I find the worst thing on earth I will also criticize it. I hope this book is useful for you.

I'm not a baker so I won't sugarcoat. Want an honest opinion? Fill in the Form. And I'm all ears. (All eyes since I'll be reading your story) **** My reviews can sometimes blur the line between 'review' and 'critique' so I'll try to be as helpful as I can. #435 in Non-Fiction 17/04/17 #400 in Non-Fiction 29/06/17 #362 in Non-Fiction 03/07/17 #246 in Non-Fiction 10/07/17

# ✦ *The Last Issue Before Dawn* ### By Jai Kav Inside the glass walls of **MONARCH**, beauty is treated like religion and exhaustion is worn like couture. When Xiao Zhan arrives at the prestigious fashion magazine as the final candidate no one expected to survive the industry, he enters a world ruled by impossible deadlines, artistic perfection, and the cold brilliance of MONARCH's Creative Director, Wang Yibo. Detached, meticulous, and emotionally untouchable, Yibo has spent years transforming fashion into carefully controlled distance. But Xiao Zhan sees things other people ignore. The loneliness hidden inside collections. The exhaustion behind perfection. The quiet ache beneath luxury. As MONARCH prepares its most important issue of the year, the two men are drawn into a relationship neither of them knows how to resist. Late-night editorials become intimate conversations. Runway concepts begin carrying emotional truths too dangerous to name. And somewhere between gold-lit photoshoots, rain against glass windows, and sleepless nights inside the editorial offices, MONARCH slowly stops feeling like work. Meanwhile, the fashion industry remains obsessed with an anonymous critic known only as **Jun_sim0501991** - a mysterious online voice feared for devastating reviews and impossible honesty. No designer escapes Jun's scrutiny, not even Wang Yibo himself. But some reviews are more personal than they appear. Set against the glittering brutality of the fashion world, *The Last Issue Before Dawn* is a slow-burning story about art, loneliness, emotional vulnerability, and two people learning how to be seen without fear. Beneath couture, controversy, and creative obsession lies a quieter truth: Some collections are inspired by love. Others are created by people already inside it.

I've been searching a long time a literary critic on Wattpad, but never I found an account still active. That's why I decided to become a "criticizer" myself.

This is just me ranting about the 4 lions show 'Humsafars' starring Harshad Chopda and Shivya Pathania, that aired way back in 2014. You're welcome to read it, but this is just an outlet to express my feelings about the show! 'Allah knows', I really need it!

This is a short story about the biography of Dominic Lloyd Owner of FlippingFiguresLLC , first starting off as youtube stop-motion shorts, unboxing and reviews and a super nerd. Bringing you a short story about the life of Dominic , his passions, dreams and desires, and what leads him onto his journey of adventure!

A playful girl who is friends with many actors and a lover of food. She has gone through some tuff things in her life. While at dinner with Chris Evans that ended up hairy, she meets Gordon Ramsey, and things seem to start to heat up. Gordon suggest that she helps him with the Hell's Kitchen chefs and to whip them into the right mind space. Did I mention she's 5 months pregnant? I'm bad at descriptions. I'm also going to say that I don't own anything but my character and parts of the plot. +Highest Ranking+ #6 kitchen #11 critic #27 criticism #26 ramsay #47 gordon #7 hells #198 food #920 pregnant #920 pregnancy

Some things about Wattpad that I don't like....

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This is just me ranting about the 2020 star plus show Shaurya aur anokhi Ki Kahaani starring Debattama Saha as Anokhi Bhalla and Karanvir Sharna as Shaurya Sabherwal.

One of Tyler's primary desires is to have a found family so he has interacted (during our non-canonical role playing) with many of KingFranPetty's characters in a familial way. This story will be about Tyler creating a found family while also maintaining his alter ego as The Flower Boy Killer.

Ever wanted to really know if your story was as good as you think? Submit the link to your story and I'll unbiasedly tell you what it's strengths and weaknesses are, what you need to fix and what you need to add more of. Warning: I'm a little bitchy.

Book Reviews by Emmalynn! If you would like a book review, just follow the form on the first chapter and request in the comment section there! Please feel free to promote this book/add it to your reading lists, the more people reading, the more everyone benefits!

I gather the best werewolf stories and tell you a little about them. (Becouse I can't copy them for cooyright reasons.) Please give the stories a chance, they are NOT mine, but they are the best stories I have read.(So far.) This list is in process, becouse I'm still reading stories. If you have any questions about the books, write me or the author.

These are the convoluted confession of a closeted gay dude.