Criticism Stories

The bugs' collectors - chapter 1 (unfinished)

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Revamp: a new and improved version. My life was quite nice, until THAT happened. {this is my first draft of the story and I only started writing it this year and it's also my very first proper book written. Please excuse me for any grammar or spelling mistakes thank you.} Noodleknown©

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SPOILER ALERT Just watching movies and tv shows and then ranting about it. Give me sth you want me to talk about and I will try. Also ngl, this is more of character reviews rather than the overall film.

A review of Lindsey Buckingham's 2021 self-titled album.

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In a distant future where earth and mars are transfixed through a literal bridge (planet telex) which has it's own broken society. The story explores the perspectives of 2 robots working in maintainence for the bridge.

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