Criticism Stories

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I've spent a lot of time thinking about what it truly means to call the Philippines 'HOME.' It's a place of incredible warmth and breathtaking beauty, but it also has its shadows and its struggles. I decided to put those feelings into words. My new poetry collection on Wattpad, Chosen Land, Beloved Beat , is my honest tribute to our country-capturing both the gold and the grit of our islands. I'd love for you to take a look and let me know which piece resonates with you the most. Follow me on Wattpad if you want, I am John Mark N. Luciano (@DonJuanMarco), if you saw the name of Moriones Zazadevha, that was my former Wattpad account. I would be publish One Poem, on Friday, Saturday and Sunday. 12:00 am(Philippine Time) (All criticism will be accepted as long as it does not contain any foul language or insults. Let us keep our Good Manners and Right Conduct. To God be the Glory.)

[OPEN] A fun place for members to have fun and exchange reads and feedback on their books!! Read the introduction for more!

[OPEN] Astania's book club for those who wish to have a stress-free, non-structured environment. You can choose any member's book to read, and receive engagement on your own book in the process! See our profile for other book clubs!

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I'm baaaackkkk. Unfortunately my other story was banned so we have to start over. And I had just hit 1k views too :( These are book reviews out of love! You may not like what you're about to read. My point is to sin books (look up cinema sins on YouTube). I love all the books I read or else I would never waste time reading them. If you're here to leave hate, go for it. Keeps me young. Xoxo

King of Pop

A critique shop for beginner writers

I'm looking for an editor maybe a friend as well

Hello, this is a very short story I wrote about five years ago or so, it's for an imaginary MMORPG I was designing coming out in the year twenty-twenty never. This was to serve as the conclusion to the elven civil war. I've mostly scrapped this world but I wanted to get my foot in the door. If you like this story please follow me and stay tuned for hopefully better and longer stories. Cover artwork by my good friend Kareem Khalifah♡: https://linktr.ee/kareemkhalifah

Giving reviews on certain books and maybe movies if I feel like it.

Short Stories Volume 1 contains three stories of different kinds but with a common link: first experiences. Let yourself be seduced by the imagination of the author of Historia de un condón (illustrated book), and get involved in these short stories with twists and turns, varied plots and unexpected endings by the writer and illustrator Víctor el Bizarro.

Currently closed for catch up. If you want honest and critical feedback, go in and try your luck. Who knows, you might find something useful or walk away depressed, enraged and disappointed. Maybe it doesn't help and you're just looking for reads and votes. Either way, if you are undeterred by the title, you may proceed...

In a distant future where earth and mars are transfixed through a literal bridge (planet telex) which has it's own broken society. The story explores the perspectives of 2 robots working in maintainence for the bridge.

As the Silver Age ends and the Bronze Age begins, the world gets darker but Superman remains a symbol of hope and he won't let that break the World's Finest... even if Batman has already embraced the darkness.

Allisa is a nice girl who grew up her whole life with everybody thinking her life was perfect. Soulmate au Suga x OC fanfic

Jeremiah 2:10-11 Has it ever been heard that a nation has changed it's gods, even though they are not gods. Friends for 6months since April 2011 i have kept silent hoping against hope that i can and will forever shut up. How can I! I will speak in favor of my God. Let up your head all you gates

He didn't just choose her. He recognized her, not for what she pretended to be, but for what she already was. This story wasn't about beauty as the world defines it. It was about what remains when the noise fades. Dignity, sincerity, grace that doesn't seek attention, but commands respect.

A lit crit by W. J. Manares

Ethan began questioning the beliefs of his religion during his teenage years after encountering contradictions between his faith's teachings and his own experiences. However, fearing the repercussions of leaving-ostracism from his family and community-he pretended to be a true believer for two decades.