Criticism Stories

this is Arya a dancer in the royal court who has a moon level attitude never wanting to fall in love living in her own fantasy and fighting every right against women to give them a free life fiery, sharp-tounged, and hates control meanwhile Satakshi a maid in the royal palace sweet kind caring and really timid never knows how to fight believes anyone who is kind towards her and these two opposite poles are besties of the palace Veer Singh Rajput the Duke of bharatvaas cold intimidating and incredibly handsome but has no interest in women and his type is a simple woman who follows orders Raj Singh Rajput the general of bharatvaas carefree around his brother and ruthless on borders kind caring always trying to make his brother smile spoiler---- satakshi and arya are walking in the corridor of the palace when Satakshi sees raj walking towards them satakshi- oi wo dekh na raj-sa kitni pyaare lag rahe hai arya- ha bilkul pyaare to hai and suddenly she pulls Satakshi in a corner and the moment raj comes to that corner she pushes Satakshi on him and he Immediately caught her and they got lost in each other's eyes while arya ran in the other direction and suddenly collided with someone and stumbled but she could fall that person caught her and she looked up and it was veer she immediately stepped back and fires at him arya- dekh ke nahi chal sakte, Nawab sahab?? veer- main to dekh ke hi chal raha tha nrityakara. ADHURA PYAAR V/S TAKRAR KYA HOGA AAGE dekhna ke liye padhiye THE DEVIL'S LIONESS on Wattpad by me.

Have you ever wanted to write a warriors fanfiction, but you

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All my life, I believed every feeling had a place inside me-joy, fear, anger, hope. But recently, something slipped away. Something important. Something that once made me human. Now I'm stuck between who I used to be and who I'm becoming, searching for the one emotion that vanished without warning. The more I look for it, the more secrets I uncover-about myself, my past, and the people who claim to care about me. To find what I've lost, I must face truths I'm not ready for and memories I've tried to forget. But if I don't uncover the missing piece soon, I might lose myself completely.

This book club is for anyone intending to make their books popular, to get more reads and to get corrected on mistakes. This is basically for beginners and those with less than a thousand reads.

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Ethan began questioning the beliefs of his religion during his teenage years after encountering contradictions between his faith's teachings and his own experiences. However, fearing the repercussions of leaving-ostracism from his family and community-he pretended to be a true believer for two decades.

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Abstract: Coiling Dragon (by I eat Tomatoes) has an almost "unreadable" side for female readers. There are a lot of nameless female characters in the book. A lot of supporting characters, including the woman the main character falls in love with, their romantic relationship, and the woman he marries. Yet, all of them either stand out thanks to their connection with the main character or they don't come out at all. There is almost no part for these female characters, no specific story, or a deep background. Even the love of the main character (Linley) and Dalia (His wife) was written on the male side, while the difficulties and love of the other side are very short and uncomfortably shallow. So, this makes the love story parts boring and meaningless. You might think that in Asian Culture, males are more dominant in the books of genres such as Wuxia and Fantasy and this strangeness is normal. Yet this book isn't like the other similar books in the same genre. It is worse. This issue is the effect of a pen that cares only about the main character of the book and tries to make him a hero and the most important center of everything. While the book, its story, and the whole-world shape the main character so naturally, there is almost no time left for female characters. I can't decide whether that is because the deep-down author sees women below or just the effect of the main character-centered plot. But comparing female characters and male characters in Coiling Dragon highlights this case in this twenty-five-thousand-page book. Inside the book (Coiling Dragon) female characters are only as deep as a household item and almost invisible. I will explain the results of my research about the I Eat Tomatoes and his possible reasons for ignoring female characters in Coiling Dragon.

A wof fan story where a peculiar small mudwing comes in contact with a cavedeweling seawing. how will their adventures go? ~ extreme notes- this story is a very wip. feel free to comment on the description or how this grows :)

Harry met Sally movie review

Prepared to be triggered by my opinions about other people's work...

BEHOLD MY BRAG BOOK This is a portfolio of awards and reviews that Ancilla and its art have received, both on Wattpad and in the real world, due to being entered in real-world contests in addition to those on Wattpad. (I self-published Ancilla commercially about a month before I published an edition of it on Wattpad). Ancilla's rate of winning contests on Wattpad, according to Google's calculator, is about one contest in three - one in two if I only look at the contests that did not fizzle out before completing. Real-world contest win rate: zero. For general wins and losses, refer to my 2024 and 2025 Books of Contests. This portfolio displays reviews, score sheets, comments, press releases, and interviews. Nearly all the material contained herein is glowing and positive (of course) but I have also tucked in some negative material and contest fails, including a downright withering review from some guy at IndieReader. Dear reader, I hope you find this entertaining. If you are an independent pro author like me, I hope you also find it useful for your journey to success.

I feel a little bored, AH why not review some books, T.V shows and movies. Also include a 'must list' recommended by me.

I write most of these when I catch a whim of some creativity. Honestly, I just want some kind of feed back to tell me how to improve. Don't hold back on your criticism. Hurt my feelings, I'm a slut for angst.

For thorns stab and pierce And blood is real, Whereas ink is what you feel. For thorns daunt and warn And blood is cheap, Whereas ink is a step from here. For thorns show the truth And blood shouts loud, Whereas ink is silent and shy...

Exactly how it sounds. I'll be ranting about fanfics and ideas I hate, as well as other things. it'll mostly be Naruto probably, but I hate a lot of things. Gaara is not one of them. I'll also be explaining ways the things I hate could be good Posted: 2/20/22 (first thing posted in 2022?) (actually no, I think I posted indras wife and Insane Hero chapters)

• Anything I find annoying in books or in stories on this app, it's all here. • I revise my work a lot, so if you notice something different with a chapter, that's why.