Criticismiswelcome Stories

Shuichi writes some letters to his classmates. (Spoilers for V3!! Don't read if you haven't finished or played the game!) Cross-posted on AO3 (where_is_my_pAnTa)

This story follows Three Heroes who mysteriously wake up in an unknown world. They have memories of nothing except their names. This story is an adventure told through their lives as they tackle the land known as Iovata. ( Please let me know if you have any critiques or recommendations to help improve my writing!)

Jacob Brown is a man *cough Vampire *cough that decided to join in on WWII because, well, why not? Join him as he gets revenge for those that died next to him during Pearl Harbor. As He joins the war he'll gain a new family and new friends. Did I mention that he's accompanied by a Vampire Dog? Btw I honestly don't really know about war so don't be angry at me if I get something wrong, I'll do my best to do my research. (::::

Tankery Teams and new schools for Sensha-do have arrived for males. There will only be two schools and each school is allowed three tanks each for the sport of tankery. The two schools must also share an aircraft carrier due to the poor budget for the male portion of Sensha-do. As the new schools are built and the main sport that they focus on is Sensha-do, both Y/n and his friend Riley are chosen to be the new heads of the Student Council for both schools. Their new jobs are to recruit new people, train the recruits while maintaining both the school and tanks, as to not disappoint their sponsors and have their funding dry up as a result of poor maintenance and management. Both of the new schools will observe and battle the already established and experienced girls teams of Sensha-do. They will not only gain experience and grow familiar with the tanks, but will also have many experiences in their life that they will never forget. This story takes place as Oorai is starting their own Sensha-do team.