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Just something to put all my ideas in. . .

hi just a normal 13 year old with an addiction to any and everything GAY also I'm a fujoshi 😋 through the covid-19 lockdown I wrote a karmaxnagisa fan fiction granted its total CRAP i still wanted to publish my first story😅 I'll try to make it better but don't raise your expectations too high anyways about this story in this fan fiction both karma and nagisa are professional assassins and they have to team up with each other to complete missions doing so they develop feelings for each other and you can see where this is going, pretty cliche if you ask me🤷‍♀️ I'll publish all 12 chapters and maybe write 1 or 2 extras(depending on the feedback, my schedule and motivation to finish this) either way I don't expect it to get that much reviews seeing as it is my first story but please feel free to comment any criticism to help me as a writer🤗 if this works out I will do another story(probably BNHA/MHA) and if that works out I might do a Q&A. for now you can call me author~chan 🤭 thats it from me see yall when I publish the first chapter 🤪

My first short story. Fans of Stephen King's The Dark Tower series would enjoy this. I give all due credit to Stephen King for his influence in this story. Obscure and Fantasy.

Mother Nature has had enough. *criticism welcomed*