Criticize Stories

Inner peace implies serenity, inward concordance, and the lack of upsetting or diverting considerations. It implies a quiet brain that can keep recollected and stay calm in each circumstance. Inner peace isn't just exclusively for yogis, ascetics, or priests, residing in some distant spot, meditating pr praying the entire day.

A collection of short stories and random poetry about betrayal and sadness and bad friends.

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Story of Criticizing Condemn and Complaining

A story that explains why sufferings and hardship is sometimes aloud in our lives

Fatima is a teenager with revolutionary thoughts.she isn't like normal girls of her age.she doesn't go fangirling over hopeless and reckless players,singers,actors,models and so called "hot guys" around. Her friends call her a freak as she doesn't fantasize either like her friends. Her fantacies are also somewhat different. She can be defined in a single word that is "different". She is studying psychology and it's her favorite subject." "Life" is the most uncertain thing" she believes. So she never plans for tomorrow and lives her 'today' at its best.

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This is a thing I do for fun in my spare time and I decided to share it, However, I get a lot of writer's block and often don't know if I like what i'm writing, so that is why it came here. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Anyways, The story is about some small businesses against a really powerful one, At least that's what it is currently. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- It might not even be that good, but I invite you to criticise every part of what I write, it helps me a lot. And if you like, suggest somethings.

Everybody is not a leader. But you are a leader. People don’t look at you. You are doing something in a wide context, their "attention"will now turn on you. Then they try to "criticize" you. They find fault in your efforts. You don’t get disturbed. You go on doing what you see as good for you or for the society. People do not stop. They fight with you. They argue and try to overpower you. Their comments will be excellent and their efforts will be excellent to spoil things. They do not allow you to get the benefits. They see that benefits do not reach either you or the society. But you don’t worry and you don't stop your efforts. You are nor away from service motive. You are neither stopped nor left behind. There is no way, now they start following you. A "leader's story" is always a bag of woes and a bunch of glitches.

What do your eyes see? What does your mind want? What does the mirror show? Me, wrote about what I see, feel and seek in a mirror.

Welcome to Book Promotions Corner! This is kimchinooona's promotion corner where she will read, give criticisms and lastly promote stories! If you are interested proceed to the first part, thank you!

No, I am not a proffessional critic. No, I do not take critique-requests. No, I do not promote books. No, you can not report me. I have freedom of speech. Yes, I'm annoying as fuck. Yes, I will say whatever the hell I think about your book. Yes, I might be younger than you but that doesn't mean you're smarter than me. Yes, I'm arrogant as fuck. No, I do not do that in real life. No, that doesn't say anything about the real me. At all. Yes, I care about you, even though I seem to hate you, I don't. No, I do not hate anyone. I just don't understand them.

A book about my problems with Wattpad.

Heyyy! Shadowshimmer and here, and I'm gonna judge your OC's! Find out more inside the book! ~Original Copy On My Quotev, and I did this with friends on there~ ~My Friends Do Not Have Wattpad, So If You Want A Review It'll Just Be Me~