Criticize Stories

So my last art book sucked. A lot. So here's a new one that sucks a little less! I'm pitching to become an animator, so for all you peeps that have a little time, please criticize my work. Throw dirt at it, it wouldn't make me mad it will help me improve and reach my goals! Please comment/vote all of this will help me reach my dreams of being an animator! (Cover by me it was quick and cruddy x'D)

Have you ever wanted somebody to critique your stories and/or give some tips? Well I'm here for the job! In the comments area, suggest your story here and I will tell you my opinion, if you should continue, and some tips to entice your readers to read your story! I will criticize your book on a chapter using the title of your story. If I particularly enjoy your story, I will include my favorite part and why! xox, me O.o

My views on some of the stories on Wattpad.

Fatima is a teenager with revolutionary thoughts.she isn't like normal girls of her age.she doesn't go fangirling over hopeless and reckless players,singers,actors,models and so called "hot guys" around. Her friends call her a freak as she doesn't fantasize either like her friends. Her fantacies are also somewhat different. She can be defined in a single word that is "different". She is studying psychology and it's her favorite subject." "Life" is the most uncertain thing" she believes. So she never plans for tomorrow and lives her 'today' at its best.

A poem to him.

Hey there Wattpadders, DEAD POET'S REVIEW 2.0 SEASON ONE is currently open for requests!!

Hello art lovers! I am a young artist of many kinds, searching for a new skill. At the moment, I am trying to make quotes/poems. I am not sure how they work, but any criticism is welcome! This is my first time writing poems/quotes in general, so please be easy on me! -Hidden

Open for all aspiring authors who wants to improve their writing skills! Andy's Critique Shop will help you in polishing and making your books better! Join now!

Everybody is not a leader. But you are a leader. People don’t look at you. You are doing something in a wide context, their "attention"will now turn on you. Then they try to "criticize" you. They find fault in your efforts. You don’t get disturbed. You go on doing what you see as good for you or for the society. People do not stop. They fight with you. They argue and try to overpower you. Their comments will be excellent and their efforts will be excellent to spoil things. They do not allow you to get the benefits. They see that benefits do not reach either you or the society. But you don’t worry and you don't stop your efforts. You are nor away from service motive. You are neither stopped nor left behind. There is no way, now they start following you. A "leader's story" is always a bag of woes and a bunch of glitches.

Revered Emperor of the Zhongfu dynasty, Zhongfu Liu, is everything a emperor shouldn't be; disrespectful, unsympathetic, and rather pompous. So when the now former emperor is forced to give up his throne, will he walk among those...those...peasants? (Critisim would be very appreciated! I'm aware this is a rather poor work of mine, but I really do want to improve, so please help me do so by sharing your thoughts!

Welcome to Book Promotions Corner! This is kimchinooona's promotion corner where she will read, give criticisms and lastly promote stories! If you are interested proceed to the first part, thank you!

Critiques and suggestions of books.

A collection of short stories and random poetry about betrayal and sadness and bad friends.

Looking for someone to review you story? I'm here to help! Back in 2011, I used to critique peoples' stories, and really enjoyed doing so. It was fun to contribute to the community, read books, and give authors a fresh perspective. Fast forward to today in 2021, a whole decade later, and I've been considering pursuing a career in editing! I'd like to get back in the groove and get some practice in, so if you'd like me to read your book and give you some feedback on your work, drop a comment. See "Submission Guidelines" for details.

We only need three