Criticize Stories

A collection of short stories and random poetry about betrayal and sadness and bad friends.

Open for all aspiring authors who wants to improve their writing skills! Andy's Critique Shop will help you in polishing and making your books better! Join now!

A story that explains why sufferings and hardship is sometimes aloud in our lives

Have you ever wanted somebody to critique your stories and/or give some tips? Well I'm here for the job! In the comments area, suggest your story here and I will tell you my opinion, if you should continue, and some tips to entice your readers to read your story! I will criticize your book on a chapter using the title of your story. If I particularly enjoy your story, I will include my favorite part and why! xox, me O.o

Sydney was once just a normal school girl, when one day, everything changes. She started to have powers which was impossible to mankind. She thought by exposing this powers, there automatically be a fat chance of her being killed by several agencies based on the facts that she used her powers to accidentally kill millions of billions of people. The agencies on the other hand, saw what they are up against with but they didn't want to kill her, nonetheless they want to work with her, so they could be the ruler of the world. Which was never going to happen without her help. Read this epic story of hers with breathtaking romance and actions.

Revered Emperor of the Zhongfu dynasty, Zhongfu Liu, is everything a emperor shouldn't be; disrespectful, unsympathetic, and rather pompous. So when the now former emperor is forced to give up his throne, will he walk among those...those...peasants? (Critisim would be very appreciated! I'm aware this is a rather poor work of mine, but I really do want to improve, so please help me do so by sharing your thoughts!

A poem to him.

So my last art book sucked. A lot. So here's a new one that sucks a little less! I'm pitching to become an animator, so for all you peeps that have a little time, please criticize my work. Throw dirt at it, it wouldn't make me mad it will help me improve and reach my goals! Please comment/vote all of this will help me reach my dreams of being an animator! (Cover by me it was quick and cruddy x'D)

Critiques and suggestions of books.

Inner peace implies serenity, inward concordance, and the lack of upsetting or diverting considerations. It implies a quiet brain that can keep recollected and stay calm in each circumstance. Inner peace isn't just exclusively for yogis, ascetics, or priests, residing in some distant spot, meditating pr praying the entire day.

My new art book, The Last one was terrible.