Criticizing Stories

" you're insecure, don't know what for " Something people should believe in more. The imperfections I try to ignore, but my crooked teeth, my larger eye, my awful skin, how I look when I cry, the sound of my voice And the frizz of my hair, I judge how it looks, when I really shouldn't care. And I know people will say " you're not ugly! " I'm sure... But it doesn't make me feel, any less insecure. Stay tuned to see this story changes it's plot from a insecure female to the most horrific romance. ©Toupoc

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I remember back when I fisrt started wattpad as a cringy 12 year old...Those days I don't like to talk about... anyways on my off account I will be talking about stuff I hate and I might ask a few ppl if I can Criticize there fan fics to help newer people grow and maybe the people I Criticize. And I might tell you who I was on there...probably not.

Growing up during the emergence of the great Hollywood, Justin Marie, wanted to be an actor. He saw greatness in such a city. Growing up in New York City, he had a passageway he can only reach. Being naive he didn't think Hollywood had any flaws. Starting his fame in 1956, Justin started to feel the harsh realization of Hollywood. Being with James Dean, Marilyn Monroe, and other great celebrities of that time, Justin goes through all the bad and little good. He meets friends along the way that help him cope with his fame. Not being able to live in the hell and heaven combined, he ends his life before the 2000s, leaving scandels, money, fame, love, and conspiracy behind him.

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