Critiqueplease Stories

In the Middle Ages as plague was sweeping towns and cities alike, a young girl, born to traditions tragedy is forced to live in a world that either wants to dance on her ashes or piss in the river they drown her in. The only questioning they have about it is which one they would enjoy more.

I'm recording my poems in here so maybe some of you can read them, relate to them, love them, etc. I'm honestly not the greatest poet and I'd love some advice on improving. Don't be afraid to comment! I recommend reading the titles to find one that suits your interests. Welcome to the inside of my head, stay a while. TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK. I HAVE THICK SKIN