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Merisa is a hybrid. Part vampire part Amazon, two creatures that can't stand each other now have a existence out of love. Her parents are gone and she's alone with only a trustworthy friend who has the same curse as her. Will she be able to fight for her pride or will she hide and run away like the very people who caused her existence and live in a lie.

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A list of things, which I try to improve on my stories. Fair Critisism and Ideas are always welcome.

"The Unseen Tightrope" tells the story of Maya's struggle to balance her mother's high expectations with her own self-worth. It's a tale of anxiety, self-discovery, and the evolving relationship between a demanding mother and her daughter, as they learn to navigate the delicate balance of their lives together.

'Story Status: Discontinued' Just a "book" that I decided to make and put my drawings in each chapter along with how I felt about it, rating it 1-10, and saying how much time it took me (With the help of Ibis-Paint of course!). Don't be afraid to add suggestions, comments, questions, ect! I've used different bases in most of the drawings! (When I say most I mean almost all! 😅) { IMCOMPLETE! WILL UPDATE/POST WHEN I HAVE SPARE TIME! }

any feedback or constructive critisism on my books but pls no hate!

A bunch of characters in situations that I have come up with or borrowed. It may get mature, depends on how I feel that day. Requests welcome. Constructive criticism welcome.

This is the typical wattpad review book with a twist: I read YOUR books. No reads on your new book with an original plot without cliches? Looking for some good reads without all of the rookie grammar problems and horrible spelling? Look no further.

Nothing special, might take requests.

Just a small doodle book fied with other random things I found. might be a little too much if I say so myself. 😆

about the mouth and what it does and how it affects our lives

Here is a poem to all the fellow human being who are stuck between everything,once you read this poem please understand you need to take care of yourself too,we are always pushed to believe beliefs even if we don't feel them as right just for the sake of other,if someone bullies you please stand fir yourself there is no Prince who will come to save you and you have to build a prosperous fortune on your own so no matter what other say and tell you (except if its constructive criticism) please ignore them if they re trying to pull you down,if you are going through something you can let it all out in the comment I will see it and tell you about the situation if you need to and remember "a problem once written well,planned well, makes your 50% of problem vanish!!" "its great to take CALCULATED risks bit take care not to harm others who trust you" -VITAL VIEW💎

This is just a incomplete beginning of my story, please give me feed back of it. I had help from friends, when it came to character's and settings.

[ON HOLD] • • • I spend a lot of time reading on Wattpad. The well-written, polished books. I wouldn't touch a book with a barge pole if there's a celebrity on the cover. Nor will I continue reading a story that has typos in the first sentence. HOWEVER, I realize that in order to improve, we need advice. Not just a comment of "great!" or "boring", but real feedback. Suggestions. Opinions. A reader's perspective... A review.