Deathiscoming Stories

When a fifteen year old teenager by the name of John Adams tries to commit suicide, he starts discovering that he is no ordinary person. He is part of the secret society called "Outsiders", people with supernatural powers. But as the Outsiders start being noticed by the world, the Government decides that it is time to get rid of all those Outsiders that pose threat to everyone. As he discovers his powers, the war with the Government rages. As a corporation of the Government rises against the Outsiders, the Corporeal Hybrids, the Government's corporation, chases the Outsiders. The war between Outsiders and Corporeal Hybrids starts. If you could give me a feedback on this, it'd be greatly appreciated!

"Death was not a shadow, nor a monster hiding in the dark; it was the inevitable presence that lingered at the edge of all things. It walked through battlefields and nursery rooms with the same steady step, touching kings and beggars alike with hands colder than time itself. No prayer could sway it, no wall could keep it out. Death was ancient, older than stars, and utterly impartial-an unblinking witness to the rise and fall of worlds, carrying each soul away with a quiet grace that was neither cruel nor kind, only certain."