Historias de Dejavou

"My breath is following me, not in me. I don't own my lungs. If I did, they wouldn't be empty." This is a story about a woman who is given a second chance at life. Will she do it right this time or will it yet again end in a horrible disaster? If you read this and notice any errors or if you are confused, please let me know in the comments. I won't hate you. I'm trying to become a better writer and I'm thinking about publishing these books one day.