Emocat95 Stories

This is the first story I'm writing. Any reads/ comments are muchly appreciated so I can do better.

Alice was just an average teenage girl with a good life, with a good best friend and a cute and sweet boyfriend. Then randomly her boyfriend starts acting weird and rain checks about all of their dates. Soon she discovers he's seeing someone else; but the craziness doesn't stop there. Soon he's trying to tell her that she needs to go to Wonderland to be slaughtered by the Queen of Hearts. How will Alice deal with all of this?