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Eleven dies. Mike griefs. But nobody notices. He hasn't cried since that day: since she went with the Upside-Down. Will is virtually over his longtime crush on Mike, but still notices when Mike spaces out, which he does alot nowadays. He worries for Mike, but decides to confront him later. When they go to Stacy's party after DnD at Mike's, alcohol makes things happen that shouldn't. Words that shouldn't be said. Pain comes to the surface. Peep the number three mention, it's a reference to the whole "three waterfalls" and "three demogorgans" spiel that I thought should've led to "three words" that Mike can't say

Jenni Harding holds the power of reflection. This allows her to empathise with others and connect with their thoughts. It can be used to help others with personal problems but there are many drawbacks as well. For example, it can cause a person to relive moments they would much rather forget. She must learn to come into her power while dealing with some guilt of her own.

'An empire once so powerful, now a country oh so woeful. Once an unstoppable rolling tide, now assailed on all sides. A faction in all parts of town, which one appears the most sound?' Aka the second time my friends have convinced me to write something out of our D&D campaigns.

Some poems from my first collection of poetry. I haven't posted in any particular order, and they are from different segments of the collection itself. I would love some feedback!

a building collection of poetry

Umm. This is me trying to like writing because apparently that's important in this world. Expect nothing because I'm not very committed to this.

Millennia passed since the Dragons found us. Centuries passed since they left us, separating the world with plumes of eternal rainbow fire. People began to wonder: were we worth saving? Dragons were beings of myth, scaled gods who descended from the heavens to teach humanity and fae. A rare few are afforded the chance to meet their heirs, the undisputed heroes of this declined age: The Scaled. These Children of Dragons are stronger, hardier, and some would say far smarter that other humans, differentiated only by the horns on their head and scales on their skin. Rael is...not one of them. But Rael does need to protect one. Especially after breaking through the rainbow fire.Rael

My Hero Academia One-shots I take requests!